The story seems good and the only thing that needs fixing is the grammar as some sentences are weird and ruin the immersion. The MC also seems questionable at times, but I’m hoping he’ll get better as the author continues the story. I’m also biased though as the story reminds me of “Everybody Else Is A Returnee”. Can’t wait for more!
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Shameless review but **** it, this novel is dropped now due to the authors many issues. He does not have time to write a new chapter as he feels like this book does not have any directions to go to and has lost his path. Also this has too many plot holes that is hard to cover up. The author is now planning to make a new novel that if enough moral support could be continued. Note: All my books are just trial and errors as I'm still a novice writer and is still learning. (I'm 16 years old so what do you expect from teenager like me?) Anyways, I'll be studying for quite a while and this planned novel might take time, so just expect a mass release of chapters for this new novel of mine😎👌.