Lerex
The story seems good and the only thing that needs fixing is the grammar as some sentences are weird and ruin the immersion. The MC also seems questionable at times, but I’m hoping he’ll get better as the author continues the story. I’m also biased though as the story reminds me of “Everybody Else Is A Returnee”. Can’t wait for more!
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