1 About The Novel (and me...)
This is my first novel, I'm writing it for fun so don't expect it to be all that professional (I will still try though). Also, I'm not a professional writer either, so don't criticize me too harshly. However, I still want criticism, I just don't want it to be to harsh.
I will be trying to post somewhat regularly, and if I don't post anything for a while, that might just mean I'm taking a break. This novel will also help me figure out whether or not I like writing. So if I end up taking an interest in writing, it might help motivate me to write more and improve.
I will also try and read any comments (if I get any...). And I'm also alright with taking suggestions for this story. If I see a comment suggesting something and I like it, I may add it into the story. Speaking of the story the main character is based off of me. He won't be an exact photo copy of me however. Instead, I will just be a foundation for the character to be built on.
By the way. If I get lucky and by some sort of magic this novel gets popular. I might try a little harder to get chapters out, as well as to try and increase their overall quality. And with me being more active I will also try and make more new story's, this story is just one of many ideas I have, and I still have plenty more that I would like to share. All I can hope for is that you enjoy the story I'm trying to tell.
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(My first story, I hope you like it)
("these mean talking" 'These mean thinking')
The suns setting, the moons out, and its freezing cold outside. So what else better to do than to read some manga and light novels on the internet. My names Bruce, and I'm nothing all that special. I like to listen to music, play video games, watch TV, and read. I'm 16 years old and a sophomore in high school. I ended up missing my bus so I had to walk home. However, on the way back, I had just started crossing the road when all of a sudden a large truck went speeding down the road, and then... I stopped crossing the road and the truck sped by missing me... Because I was smart enough to look both ways before crossing the street I guess? So I get home, plop down on my bed, and start reading a book. Before I know it, it's already night time, and then everything slowly started to fade away, eventually turning into a black void
(Bruce) 'Did I fall asleep? this wouldn't be the first time I passed out while reading something' "haha..... ha..."
(Bruce) "..."
(Bruce) 'If I'm asleep, then why am I still in this endless black void of nothing... I mean, I can feel myself perfectly and move around. Its not like I get anywhere when I do move, but I still can'
A grim thought slowly started to creep into my mind... Death
(Bruce) "There's no way I'm dead... right?"
I say this while gently nodding, trying to reassure myself...
(Bruce) "I mean, I'm perfectly healthy, I know I'm somewhat lazy, but I'm still considered healthy. I got good scores on the pacer and the mile run"
(Bruce) "Maybe it was carbon monoxide, hmm... Probably not, if it was an alarm would have gone off and I would have woke up. Well that settles it, I'm not dead"
After I say that the void suddenly turns white, and then a old man with a long radiant beard, shinning robes, and calming aura appears before me. And then with a calm yet powerful voice the old man tells me...
(???) "Sorry it took me so long, I had to take care of something. Well no matter... Your dead so its not like times is all that relevant now anyways"
(Bruce) "..."
