Reviews of Snacks

Pretty intriguing plot. A renown Hollywood actor accused and framed for a crime he didn't commit. It has a sense of realism in it as such cases have been prevalent since decades ago. I would suggest rereading your chapters before posting as there were some repeated words in the sentence like "your and and your" and also checking your tenses. "there= something far away; their= something belonging to someone" I know I sound fussy, but, the story has potential and there are quite a few readers who back away from good stories just because of this minor issue. Anyways, enough of my rants, this is a good story. Don't let anyone say otherwise.☺ Keep it up, author-san~

Hey gusy this is my Story i hope you guys like it i rated it 5 stars the chapters will be quite long i hope you guys are ok with that 👍