Anonny_Anonymous
I have to say I love almost everything about this story. The plot is awesome if you like OP characters. The writing is really good other then some small mistakes witch if your reading comprehension is good are easily glossed over. It is action packed and fun to read. The characters are pretty vibrant. I enjoy it a lot. Now for the downside. While it is action packed and fast paced. The pace is literally mach 3000. He just decides things and does them while this was fine for a while after 10 chapters it becomes monotonies. He just keeps listing things hes doing and then you wait for him to interact with some one and that interaction is all but 1 paragraph or at most a chapter. the main problem is he has no meaningful relationships with anyone in the entire world sure he loves his friends and family but I didn't know he had any friends till he shared a bi line with chloe I thought they just worked at the torch together. Not only that but it seem like acquiring power has become his addiction. And i dont see him actually doing anything else he just lists everything hes done or is doing. so while its action packed and really fast paced. I think the pace should be slowed and he should really start living his life.
Really liked this story, author has some really good ideas. It's been 8 months since he last updated this fanfic. please author don't abandon the story, and please post updates & new chapters soon. The smallville universe is amazing, and your fanfic smallville universe is just as amazing. So I look forward to reading more of it. No pressure though. But please post more chapters!!
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