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Yairy
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Up until now I have to say that this novel in great. It´s well writen, has good characters and background. It´s interesting and it gets you inmersed in the reading, feeling happy and sad (depending on the scene). I´m already waiting to the next update.
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I was just in my bed wandering what I should read about then I saw this book. I've read the description and it catch my attention so much that I read this for an entire day. I would say that these has been very interesting to me and I like your writing style so much. The way you write your dialogue and etc made me feel butterflies in my stomach.I'm glad I read this book I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. This has so much potential and I wish more people can read it. ps. this is my first time writing a review (๑♡⌓♡๑)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤♡(> ਊ <)♡ (つ≧▽≦)つ(つ✧ω✧)つo((*^▽^*))o
This is a fairly early review so take it with a grain of salt latter on. It is fairly interesting and the pacing is smooth, the characters are interesting this early on. The slice of life approach in the modern setting fits well with the novel. Other than that, auther-sama I hope you continue this novel.
It's nice reading experience and I've to say that you portrayed the slice of life well. Writing wise, it's good written and very comfortable to read, dialogue writing is also nice and fresh. The story is filled with emotion and feeling that are portrayed well. Something taboo is always exciting to read and the way the problem and conflict are told is nicely executed. And also, the length of chapters in this book is wow, that's quite satisfying to read. Overall, it's nice reading experience. Best luck to you 🙂
Review of the novel Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady Message to the author I am so glad to find a complete and free to read the novel. Thanks to that, my life will be at ease. I am happy to see a hidden gem in these piles of books. Well, what are you waiting for!? Read now!
Read the first chapter. These are some long chaps you have! Are they 5k+ words? I'm used to shorter chaps, so I only read the first, and a little bit into 2. But, I like where it's going. I've never really explored the concept of Yuri, although I am a fan of romance, and the characters seem quite intriguing in terms of their potential in the future. Well done so far!
While this is not the type of novel I would usually read, I can appreciate the intrigue of the plot and the author's writing skill. From the first chapter, the author handles a lot of serious topics, but embeds lighthearted humour that makes the novel more enjoyable to read. Great characterization, nice pace. Overall, great work!
I haven't read all of the chapters but after reading the beginning parts of the story i was just too eager to leave a review! I like the plot, firstly, it's unique for me and quite different. The main characters also seem interesting and i am very intrigued to know more about them of course. I like how you write, the way you describe things can easily hook a reader. I wish to read further to know what will happen next in the story! :D Keep writing!
