Reviews of Slave to the mafia boss

I have never written a review before so dont expect those professional reviews talking about storyline or anything but since I'm the only one here might as well. I'm only gonna point out what I noticed, so first off the grammar isn't the best and I had to stop a couple of times to correct the mistakes, the title for the first chapter is basically spoiling who the ML is but I got no problem with that cus he would probably appear just a few chapters later(not yet since there only 2 chapters but yeah), the second chapter is....it says what will happen but I guess its fine since it has no major spoilers about the whole story. I can't think of anything else right now, keep in mind I'm a normal person with no reviewing experience so don't expect much out of this but overall I'm pretty interested and when I hear ML's name I think of Sebastián from Black butler. I...the stars are too complicated for me so I'm gonna put a 3 on everything, I consider a 3 as an average or just put a 3 when I dont have enough information to judge so yeah. I hope this review wasn't completely useless even tho its not well writen. Give it a read I guess, theres not enough info to tell how good its gonna be but I means its pretty short right now so I don't think it would waste your reading time to read other stories.