Sinz of Man

Amazing! Good plot, well paced, intriguing character. Highly recommended!🥰

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

"'Sinz of Man' is like a slow-burning fire - it simmers, it crackles, and it leaves an indelible mark. A deeply human, deeply moving story that will linger long after the final page." Any questions on the story comment down below

Interesting novel. Waiting for more updates from the author. The character development is amazing and interesting. I also love the picture. It's captivating

Well, it involves the seven sins. This is quite a big story theme. I hope for the author to pull it through. Great job so far with the characters. 👏👏👏

The writing quality is good on most parts, and the story develops at a speed one can understand. The characters to me all evil...just were did the kind people go? Even those named kind, are doing something bad in the background. Although, the Mc develops gradually, we still have to see more about the side characters.

good premise and good writing quality. Pace is fast and it won’t bore you. You can easily see and feel main character’s struggle.

Wow hooked just with two chapters and can't even wait for more , I hope releasing is everyday🙏❤❤

Nice book..Has a lot of potential. Upload more chapters

There are a few areas where the chapter could be improved. Some of the transitions between scenes could be smoother, and there are a few instances where the pacing feels a bit uneven. Additionally, while the mystery and suspense are engaging, some readers may find themselves wanting more answers and explanations earlier on. Overall, "Sinz of Man" shows great promise as a fantasy novel. With its intriguing premise, well-developed characters, and suspenseful plot, it has the potential to be a must-read for fans of the genre. While it may have a few minor flaws, they do not detract significantly from the overall enjoyment of the story. I look forward to seeing how the plot unfolds and how Kensu's character develops in the chapters to come. I would rate this chapter 4.4 out of 5 stars.

Interesting story cause now I’d recommend it