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I'm in love with this book, just 14 chaps and I'm already in love, I love how you describe the characters and their dresses and most especially Sylvia POV it's almost like I'm the one in there lol... great job author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is an excellent fantasy world novel. The world building and settings are all described eloquently. The plot is solid, with good flow between chapters. The main characters are well fleshed out and actually make you want to root for them. Other and side characters make the novel more interesting and add an extra layer to the plot. A well written book that is a good read for readers interested in this genre or a fresh new reader.
Although I don't usually read books of this genre, I still managed to enjoy the read and the plot surprisingly. The beginning starts of well, leaving the reader with many questions and the plot develops at a good pace. Also The grammar and syntax were near perfect and there were barely any mistakes allowing for a smooth read, which I liked. i definitely recommend this read if you are looking for a good romance novel. Lastly, Keep up the good work author!