is the story good? I dont know
world building,idk
plot,idk
character development,idk
why dont I know you ask?
becouse the translation is comeple and utter shit ,even mtl is better then this
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The Story is pretty ok it makes the pretend to be weak.
I dont know where the plot will go, Character Development maybe.
World background it's pretty cool but the translation has mistakes in it but it's readable
Good and interesting story. The onlynproblem is Machine translation. I actually stopped reading after it turned out that Mu Qianqian is a manβ¦β¦β¦β¦
The **** is this i cant understand shit
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