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I'm sure you will enjoy it all if your ok with harem genre and OP MC, which is a bit more better than a normal harem storyline here because they have anime girl and a good quality in writing character design that makes every chapter have there own good progress... overall it's a good thing to try (^._.^)οΎ
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Overall Ive only read like 20 chapters and will definitely continue reading this story. Minor grammatical mistakes but none bad enough where you dont know what the author is saying. HUGE harem story Filled with humor and action. Also author i think it would be smart if you were to make an auxiliary chapter thats just a list of all the mc wifes with their name, race, and power, because i keep getting people mixed up lol.
I'm sorry to say this but i could read only till the chapter 3. Normally i would give it change, because i genuinely like harem genre and rarely drop a novel involves a harem route. But your novel feels like a causal conversation between 2 people due to your writing and narrative. Sometimes i can't understand what's happening due to things developing randomly and fast without having a proper explanation and building. Like he casually says he's from another word and she shouldn't say anything about it. But she just straight accepts it. No questions? No thoughts or precautions before revealing you're from another world? It seems everything is OK.
The writing in the story could do better but if you comment on the story the auther will reply or like it,so if you ever see a mistake just comment it to help the auther out.The auther updates frequently with chapters.Since the auther works so hard leave a lil comment here and there to help keep the auther motivated! They write two stories so I know they must be overwhelmed at times πThe story development is interesting and I canβt wait to see what else the auther has planned for the book.The charcter design feels a little rushed at some moments but thats just my opionπ€·ββοΈ(You may like how it is so check the book out.)Lastly the world background is thoght out really well I give it a 4.5 πββοΈ P.S like I said the auther is really friendly and helps if something confuse you and if you are reading this have a nice day
The carachters are well developed. Updates are very frequent. Could use a little more background to the world but the read is from the MC's perspective. only complaint is sometimes the writing is strange or broken and a few misspelled words but that's forgivable, we are all human. Oh and its funny as ****, great job with the comedic factor of the story.[img=update]
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