Cmon bro please continue this novel. Please dont abandon this good novel. I wait for next chapter, please fast update next chapter. Im really like your story bro, cmon bro fast release next chapter, this story have huge potential if you can make a fast release i believe this novel will make top ranking original novel. Dont waste your potential bro keep continue this novel i believe in you bro.
This has been very intriguing as it has the main character pretty much doing his own thing and not just following along with the original MC's. The only problem I've seen is most of the personalities of the side characters like his wives in particular, tend to just have a blanket personality. If they didn't say their names would have no idea who was who. Also seems to do this with any villain's giving them the standard d@#k-bag personality. This seems to be an ongoing problem in any fan-fiction being able to capture side characters personality when they only show up in the original fiction with these traits, But giving them more screen time an author should evolve their personality inline with their own novel. (BREAK THE MOLD!!!) Other wise worth the read and support; an instant add to the library.
Hello good sir I would like to have a suggestion that I think would be cool well two to be exact. I think Simon should have the ability to get all elemental chakra affinities and sage modes(including one where all are put together) and the ability to create a system (not up and would require him to have the strength) at first it would be just a status but as he gains power he can upgrade it and give it to other people (he can create as many as he wants) mainly towards the end of the story which could give a good opportunity for a second novel with a different character with ability’s from ‘god’ and a system from current mc
This is the best harem novel i read so far. Advice from me to author is to detail the *** scene and it will make this novel better. And make this novel have action,***, and a little bit of comedy will make this novel perfect. Ohh and if author can make a fast update i believe this novel will become the best harem novel.