its something u never wanted but always needed. The author that wrote this is also someone that wrote one of the best HP FF's in the web....and this shit is dope. like shit..the idea. . SI SHIKI, 22 yrs before cannon. god damn. PLus his DF is OP as fk [ plus its modified a bit here, and its in a dope way]. Love the concept and execution. The MC is so far presented as a thinking man rather than an idiot. dope. dude dosnt kill needlessly and isnt a pervert [ atleast so far ] if u can use fictional and science knowledge for advantage. make MC smart, any relationships just build..dont make him a perverted retard. GL
It would've been great if the story was really about Shiki the Golden Lion, or at least a SI with some of Shiki's personality traits... but what do we get? A self-righteous weakling in the body of one of the world's most powerful men. Why do I say this? The MC whilst escaping prison preaches about not helping so-called scum escape the prison, and then goes onto show mercy to marines for the reason that 'they're keep the prisoners locked up'. All of this in the 1st chapter! Heroic knight MC in the body of a villain - the height of disappointment! Avoid if you expected anything slightly mature, read if you like white knight MCs.
I've read so many fanfics a frankly ridiculous amount and this, with just one chapter, is already one of my favorites so please don't stop writing this, I understand if you do sometimes life happens and you have to but please keep this alive for as long as possible. Also I couldn't give you my power stones for some reason, I would like to know if anyone knew why?
Wow I'm not sure what already happened or not in this timeline, but this fic has a lot of Kingdom Building and Army Building potential. With his devil fruit he can make floating islands, so he could save Ohara and their knowledge, recruiting Olvia (Nico's mother) and Nico Robin herself. He could befriend, recruit future powerhouses and poach them like Shanks, Mihawk, Law, Ace, Sabo, Kuma, Urouge, Jewel Bonney, Tom the shipwright, Sun pirates (Jinbe), the Giants, the Drawves, Minks, people from Wano, Kuja (Hancock and her sisters), Capone Bege... Or convert future enemes into his crewmates like Gekko Moriah(aftee his crewmates were massacred), Vegapunk, Caesar Clown, Basil... He could also follow some people to get their future devil fruits and take them. There are so many possibilities!! I'm really excited about your fic. Personally I prefer daily chapters (or at least regular) even if they are short chapters so I don't forget the details of the story. I read many fictions and I m always more invested in the stories I know I get to read daily. Thank you and keep writing!