Reviews of Shiki The Golden Lion

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its something u never wanted but always needed. The author that wrote this is also someone that wrote one of the best HP FF's in the web....and this shit is dope. like shit..the idea. . SI SHIKI, 22 yrs before cannon. god damn. PLus his DF is OP as fk [ plus its modified a bit here, and its in a dope way]. Love the concept and execution. The MC is so far presented as a thinking man rather than an idiot. dope. dude dosnt kill needlessly and isnt a pervert [ atleast so far ] if u can use fictional and science knowledge for advantage. make MC smart, any relationships just build..dont make him a perverted retard. GL


It would've been great if the story was really about Shiki the Golden Lion, or at least a SI with some of Shiki's personality traits... but what do we get? A self-righteous weakling in the body of one of the world's most powerful men. Why do I say this? The MC whilst escaping prison preaches about not helping so-called scum escape the prison, and then goes onto show mercy to marines for the reason that 'they're keep the prisoners locked up'. All of this in the 1st chapter! Heroic knight MC in the body of a villain - the height of disappointment! Avoid if you expected anything slightly mature, read if you like white knight MCs.


I've read so many fanfics a frankly ridiculous amount and this, with just one chapter, is already one of my favorites so please don't stop writing this, I understand if you do sometimes life happens and you have to but please keep this alive for as long as possible. Also I couldn't give you my power stones for some reason, I would like to know if anyone knew why?


amazing fanfic. may I suggest Tesoro as a potential crewmate?? he is surely one of the best choices. and soon it will not be Yonko but Goko!!{Sound like goku from dragon ball} 'Five Emperors of sea!' I think since time is still earlier he can recuit some good people.


This is awsome and I really like the idea of this work because its so far away in the generic one piece ff so all in all its really f*cking awsome.............


Please more chapters I beg u more chapter! Please more chapters I beg u more chapter! Please more chapters I beg u more chapter! Please more chapters I beg u more chapter! Please more chapters I beg u more chapter!


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Wow I'm not sure what already happened or not in this timeline, but this fic has a lot of Kingdom Building and Army Building potential. With his devil fruit he can make floating islands, so he could save Ohara and their knowledge, recruiting Olvia (Nico's mother) and Nico Robin herself. He could befriend, recruit future powerhouses and poach them like Shanks, Mihawk, Law, Ace, Sabo, Kuma, Urouge, Jewel Bonney, Tom the shipwright, Sun pirates (Jinbe), the Giants, the Drawves, Minks, people from Wano, Kuja (Hancock and her sisters), Capone Bege... Or convert future enemes into his crewmates like Gekko Moriah(aftee his crewmates were massacred), Vegapunk, Caesar Clown, Basil... He could also follow some people to get their future devil fruits and take them. There are so many possibilities!! I'm really excited about your fic. Personally I prefer daily chapters (or at least regular) even if they are short chapters so I don't forget the details of the story. I read many fictions and I m always more invested in the stories I know I get to read daily. Thank you and keep writing!


hah finally found a new good fanfic,this fanfic one of the best read xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


Possibly a future best one piece fanfic, sadly there are too few chapters until now to make a better review but I love the story and characters so far :) i cant wait to see what story you come up with for his journey to become and as a yonko :D




honestly really good. I'm actually impressed by this fanfic, the writing isn't garbage, the story is good and the idea is also very interesting, now if you just updated the story it would much better.


alright so the story is damn good. One of the few good ones on this site. Author, post this story on spacebattles, sufficient velocity, and fanfiction.net. You reach a wider audience and get better reviews.




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nice .


bruh... kill Doflamingo and everyone else then steal SugarπŸ˜‚ hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha!πŸ˜‚


Only five chapters in and I already want at least 100 more seems seems really interesting and a new twist on one piece showing more of the oldion


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the story are good so far. im lookomg forward on how your gonna develop this story hopwfully for the better. hmm. jfjf if kfkfkfkfkfkfkfjfjfjfjfjfj