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I can feel your excitement and love of writing from this piece. This is from a teacher's point of view. I HIGHLY recommend that the author goes back and edits what has already been written to polish this piece. Omitted words, punctuation issues and garbled sentences may be hindering the readers from connecting with your story. I truly mean this review to be a suggestion that will help you improve your craft and not as a criticism.
I love this story. At first I was a little bored only because I was expecting magic straight away. But I kept reading and got really into the story. I do sometimes forget other characte names and then when they come up Iβm like, oh! Itβs that person! But overall, this is is a really really great story. The world background is amazing, the multiple realms and different worldsβ¦ The relationship between the characters are very relatable. Also Kendraβs personality is another thing I love. She has an upright personality but isnβt like those other characters who immediately forgive someone who does wrong and she does kill people, but only those who deserve to be killed. And how she erases the persons soul as a form of kindness. Overall, an amazing story.β€οΈβ€οΈπ
At first, the story is boring that's also the reason why I skip some chapters. But I decided to give this story a chance since it's just the beginning of the story. I never know, it might get good as long as I read some other chapters. And well, I'm right. It does get interesting as the story moved forward. But not enough to get me hook. But still, it's good
Dear author, I'm currently finding the story to be very interesting, hence I was wondering if you'd be interested if I did some correction? (by that I mean simply spelling, grammar and such) It's such a good story, in my point of view, that it would be sad if people stopped reading simply because of that. I'd be interested in doing that in my free time. That'd be a nice little project for me.
After living a life hard work and regret Miss Kendra Johnson has grown up in an orphanage but because she was smart, she managed to climb to the top through hard work and she back a billionaire in her previous life but with regrets because she didn't get time make friends and create also family yet old age had caught up with her and she wished if only she did have a second chance, she would live life differently. Upon her death a chance caught up with her as she woke up in a body of a 7 to 8 year girl in an unknown era.
Rather good storyline. I guess writer has difficulties with English grammar, but that is fine with me. I don't understand some people complaining. This story is literally different than common stories. The writer is just beginner, so to expect Lord of the Rings story, is kind of too much. I am at least grateful about new approach. Good work writer and have fun writing. Do not listen to haters, they are just jealous about their lack of imagination. So just keep dreaming and everything will be fine :)
It's a good story. Really. It's a little bit slow pace novel so can get a little bor sometimes. But i always return to the continue reading. So even if it starts getting a little bit boring, it still is worth staying in your library bc u will always come back. This is exactly why I recommend this novel. And u don't forget the story line so fast cause of it unique characters and story. Hope this is able to help u decide.
This book has many awesome characters that arenβt too over powered (at least not right now). Kendra (the MC) is a badass who is kind to those who are good and cruel to those who deserves it. It really is a slow but great read. However, the grammar is terrible (sorry author!), I donβt mean commas or punctuation (mine isnβt that great either haha) but as in misusing tenses and saying things like β I and your mother,β instead of βyour mother and I.β It doesnβt affect the story greatly, but it does make the sentences seem strange and flow not quite right(also, this book has many misspelled words), so I would recommend that the author check his/her chapters before posting. Other that that, this book is π₯π, itβs a good read!
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I actually like the idea for this story and I like to imagine that the direction it goes will be interesting. Though the sentence construction and grammar needs more work, I'm still enjoying reading this story. The story is actually unique and have a sense of adventure which I find very interesting, compared to other transmigration stories.