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Great book. An interesting story, a good grammar and word choice. Being unique in its own way, the story depicts exciting scenes where as a reader, you will feel general excitement. There is no flaw I could see for now as both the character and the world development is good. The stability of the updates is also good and although you could see some days the author doesn't update, it's not much and is a rare occurrence. Recommend for people.
Shameless review by the author, sorry if the first part of my mc is that he is not someone great. But I will build him up as the chapters go on. Also the abilities of the MC will rely on future technology like laser guns, robots, mechs, ships and stuff. So be patient if he starts weak and hopeless on the first beginning chapters. I hope you give my story a try and my story is pseudo harem. Which means he will have only have one romantic interest but he wont win all the girls feelings they will just be a companion or ally.
Nice work, so far! Sorry it took me so long to get to reading. I'm on CH. 6 so far, and I like how you're slowly building the story, the characters, and the world. Keep dropping those teases and I think your story is going to be amazing! Don't let the nay-sayers get you down, as you've got so much potential, and I look forward to your success! I think my only real critique is focus a bit more attention on grammar, and that would get you to a full 5 star review from me, as well!
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