Septem

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Unfortunetly it is probably dropped. If autor comes back, then it will be most welcomed. Story is nice. MC is one of a kind (havent seen mc like him yet)

The story seems quite interesting and unique which I do like, but the grammar is one of the worst. Words like 'word' is 'worth' etc. It's unbearable to read, unfortunately.

I'm enjoying the story so far I just have one request that is stable update 7+1::8 souls in one body with 11 element wow nice I'm waiting for new chapters thanks man for this novla

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Well honestly this book has a very interesting storyline. It just has too much grammatical errors. But overall it's a good book. 🤣👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍. ............................................................................................................... .

The English isnt the best but still is readable also the characters are good and the story is nice so far a very good novel But then again expect some grammar errors and thats about it its still a good novel nontheless

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I don't know what to say,yet again.The concept of 7 sin always was intresting for me,multiply personalites as well.So yeah,it was deffinitly one of those that keep picking my interest.The problem is that,it's not used.Not in a proper way,not in a ortodox psyhological way or even not in a comedy,why?Cuz it's all for later.Like really,all the good stuff can be here,but not now.Yeah,in the world of jungle law and yare-yare-yare,killing and torturing even brainwashing is not a big deal.So why you try to emphasis that he is evil,I don't get it.Yes from our prespectiv it's definitely not a good deed,even if it's happening even in our world,but there he is really mild.More like overprotective father.Or shame and worldbuilding still not there,cuz we can't see or understand where his little games lead.Mostly because we don't know about this world.How he's sin works even in our world ,like where this program of supersoldier just with the own body came from?How greed have more ability in the brain departament if they have one body,wrath punch that can levelled island,how,where it's for a future.So yeah,all for the future.For now whe have questions,it's good but world don't expand.All of this arc,mostly for the sake of future stuff,but I don't see where world and characters got more attention.Now whe have cringe worth slice of life of 8 years kid,who can't do anything but think of future,and flirt with kid.Heck,he don't even enjoy his life,he just work hard,for fighing in the future.It's may sound strange,but I don't have a filling that mc even has life at all.And will change review when story,characters,world or something intresting happend.And no,magic factory is not a progres.Hope for the best,though.

So very interesting and I highly recommend reading this novel to everyone who wants something to read. This story is pretty good from what I see of the other reviews I’ve read and the summary alone. I reading this for sure!! keep chapters coming 😎😎😎

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I just want more chapters ... more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.

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