Anna_k
Just started this story last night and am already in love with it ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππmore chapters please I love your story dear author
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Wow! I love this story so much! Imma give it 9.9! I can already tell the story is a gem after reading the description. I really love it! The antagonist doesn't pissed me, for the first time. Instead, I just laughed it off! The antagonist is such a damn spoiled woman! I gotta say I love the first meeting of the the two MC. The guy is so sweet, and I could already tell the atmosphere, despite the ML doing that to MC. Overall-- I love this!
This story really draws the reader in with it's balanced plot and character development. Li Xiaolu is a solid heroine with the nice mix of strength and softness. The hero, Zhang Zeahan is strong, gentle and together they have the right amount of physical appeal. The author did not forget the villains readers love to hate - which include a scumbag family, a super crappy boyfriend (for the herione) and equally attractive competitor for the hero. Biggest drawback for the story is the LACK OF PROOFREADING. Serious editing is needed before publishing. Though the storytelling is good, the lack of editing will hold this story back some. It is not the readers responsiblity to try to figure out what the author wants to convey in their writing. So, PROOFREADING for correct spelling, work tense, etc is necessary. For those those out there who will say "don't read this story if you don't like it", this is not the case. In my opinion, this is a darn good story that remind me of others I have come across on this app and like this story, I (and other readers) pay money for the privilege to read it. So, a little editing will help.
just another clichΓ© novel about the girl going back to the past ..you can just figure out the plot for the next 500 chapters without even thinking. the grammar is passable ..the characters are also kinda 2d. like ..the part where she found yang mi. all she said that i wanna be an actress under you and thats all she needed to get the manager to think of her positively. although I gave the world background 3 stars..idk if it deserves it.. since this is not a fantasy novel i would've loved the characters to be more 'realistic'. i know this review might get drowned in the thousand of reviews ..but i hope whoever reads this gets an idea of what this novel is...and not waste their time in case they have similar standards as mine lol
Wow......I like the way the story us going on...the main fauy and the main girl was already engaged when they were young and they didn't now that still now..I hope the girl units with her family asap...and also I want to know who will the second lead ready when he will come to know the truth about his father..