Reviews of Second chance with system

I am this novel's author. First, i'm sorry all you. My english is pretty bad. So the English in this novel is not good. But, i will try to learn English more. I promise will be better in English and next stories, of coure this novel too. Second, please give me a chance. I wish you support me. ^^ Please comment and rank my novel.

It's pretty good. I hope this story get more interesting. I think i shall support you.