Second Chance - To Live Again

Review valid as of Chapter 10 Writing Quality: A few mistakes. Examples: Chapter 2- "speak" - remember to start your dialogue with a capital letter, "(S) speak." Same goes for the beginning of any sentence. A eunch --> (A) Your missing quite a few full stops in some areas too. I suggest proof reading and then editing your chapters properly before posting. For ****** mistakes though, you could just use the free version of grammarly 🤔 Story Development: For ten chapters the story is developing quite quickly. I actually like how fast pace it is, no room for questions since they are quickly answered in the following chapters. Character Design: The female lead Fu Ya personality develops as the story progresses. She seems to be a very reliant person during the start of the story. And yet at the same time her strong personality comes forth when it comes to her beloved. Though these strong emotions turned into hate. The FL transition from a weak to a stronger character is portrayed very well due to the authors writing style. World background: The transition from the new world from the old was written well, with the way chapter then again the chapter title helped clarify the switch. Apologize for the delayed review, (ू˃̣̣̣̣̣̣︿˂̣̣̣̣̣̣ ू)

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I love the first few chapters --it's easy to put yourself in the shoes of the main character. I love a good revenge story and I'm also a sucker for transmigration themes :) I look forward to reading more chapters.

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