Reviews of Science/Magic
Science/Magic
Aidka
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Wow this novel is 24 chapters in only and I'm speechless. The author really does a good job making me grow attached to characters you sadistic bastardđą. Moving on if your on the fence about whether or not to read this novel literally stop reading this review right now and click the first chapter that simple, cause if this quality of chapters continue its gonna be straight gold nuff said.
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Just remove it from my library the story at the start is good but the quality turn to **** the more you read it it follows the common **** that most author falls into that is tropes typical tropes in this story is everywhere it's like the writter is following a different story at the same copying it only to fail miserable at producing a quality one so overall it's good if you don't mind cliché **** but t season readers like me it's a trash like who the hell does something without a goddamn reason it's out right stupid the MC is your typical cut out cardboard MC.
Good story but destroyed by the story's development and character design. Great novel until harem took over, the good quality is destroyed, I wonder why would people like novel full of harem? in there life do they not seen women or rare in their place? Such good essence is destroyed but still a good novel tho.
The beginning of the novel seems promising but the more you read the more dissappointed you get. the tart seems interesting and new, differnet from the run of the mill stry, then everything falls into one long string of clicheâs to the point where you can accuratley predict hat is going to happen next. I recommend the authorâs other Novel âThe Fourth princes Debaucheryâ (i may have somewhat butchered this title) that story is better then this one and i gurantee that you will not be dissappointed by that one!
This story is great. It regularly updates and has many chapters with sound writing and story development. The characters are interesting and the world background is good and expansive. The only issue I have is with its beginning. The story starts off with just too many tragedies. Not only was his families betrayal sad, but so was Camilla's choice. I think she has become part of Vallkary (half soul) but nonetheless, it was heartless and a reason to quit reading. Although over time her reason is explained, but the bitter taste of start remained. I only continued to read after because of the Author's other work in hopes of it getting better and it did. There was also MC's character that seemed very erratic when he acted like a hero for no reason and he failed to cover his tracks even though he read a lot of books as a prince and also from the protector of Exiled land. 1 - Camilla's decision, 2 - his heroic act and trying to fight blight does not suit him and his personality, 3- his mistakes in covering his tracks are the shortcomings of the book. (Without any proper explanation from Camilla herself her action shouts, I don't care about you. I do not expect to change the end of the first arc, but the lack of proper reason for her action is the problem. especially since she also wanted to stay longer a few chapters before.) Overall, the story has great it has everything you can expect from it. The MC is likeable most of the time. The story flows greatly and the side characters are developed and very likeable. Especially the latest arc about Slaughter God is very interesting. I also find the addition of Harem, with proper character development a positive of the story. I am not sure if the Heroic path is where he should end up, but nonetheless, it was a great read so far and looking forward to more.
to be honest, you can read 25 chapters drop and say that you read a really good novel, after it only decays, i reached chapter 180 and to me it seems that the author was prioritizing quantity over quality, the MC becomes a doll that follows what happens around him, being pushed to conflict after conflict by other people, when he could just leave.
