I like the concept of dreams. Overall a good start, some parts could use a little work and the chapters could be longer, but that can get better with practice. Keep writing author!
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The overall concept is nice, but tenses and descriptions could use a little work, it has a promising start, so sad the chapters are short, but it’s a very interesting read