Zhee_Aliyu
BIGGEST ISSUE: The ENTIRE romantic conflict of the novel can be resolved by like chapter 10 if the MC just offers one sentence of explanation but instead he says everything but that and it’s infuriating as F. Outside of that: The novel is a bit cringe with its kind of random use of JP words & the overly edgy MC but the writing is otherwise superb IMO. The characters are interesting and I genuinely root for the romance and understand why the MC falls for the ML but the ML doesn’t rly have a reason to like the MC or at least his motives aren’t clear yet (c50). Everything 5/5 besides story which is 3/5 for aforementioned reasons.
I started this as one of the "read recommendations for 20 min" ... by the time I realized I was past 20 min, it was chapter 50, and I was hooked. Other than the occasional name changes, which stopped bothering me, I love this book. It's intense, it's well written, and the story and character development are great. I am officially addicted to a book I didn't intend to read past 20 min.
I’m sorry, I cannot keep reading the story when the names are not consistent, sometimes the same person is called an asian name and sometimes something like felix, it’s really annoying, I don’t mind grammatical errors but this is really stopping me from enjoying the story. Besides that I cannot relate to the character development, his revenge-feeling is getting annoying throughout the story. Nevertheless the romantic and hot parts are really nice.