Saiyan system in Naruto's world

Basically the worst Machine Translation of some random Chinese fanfic which is probably decent. It's worse than google translate levels of grammar and sentences don't make sense at all.

Looks to be a good story but needs an editor to clean it up, otherwise its really hard to read and follow.

Reading this novel is like trying eat a spoonful of cinnamon. You just can't do it. Now I'm sure that it might be a decent novel but google translate is not the way to go.

This has horrible grammar and it’s hard to read I have to re-read most and it says more than four Times to understand with all of this is saying if you do not speak English then you should just say that you don’t speak English and save those of us who do our time from wasting it reading this trash you need to get someone to re-read and or proofread whatever it may be this before you start posting more chapters because this is horrible

I no longer know what this is What is he writing What is he translating This is bad to understand very bad I can't understand I try to understand it but I can't.

it's ok at best but it dosent feel cohesive and while your reading is alittle hard to understand, what it needs is an editor to fix things up and it would be alright

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simply it's too bad to read. I like the idea of the story but really too bad writing.. can't read more then a couple of chapter. try to rewrite maybe can ge a good fan-fiction