Reviews of Ryo the illusionist - Naruto fanfiction (Completed)

In short: OP MC, no ecchi, no harem, not isakai, no system, doesnt diviate from original time line and power levels too much, very emotionally heavy, low action, mostly focused on the emotional side (mc remids me of one of my best friends so it hit me harder then it ahould have)

Really good novel. It has made me so emotional while reading that every chapter almost brings me to tears. I hope that you continue with the novel.

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Great story. It's very well written and shows the shinobi from someone who was not protected by their clan or the hokage. It also makes you want to jump in the novel and slap a couple characters for Ryo but at the same time you're not angry at him for not hurting them because you know how broken he is. Q: Is their going to be a twist were Ryo reincarnates/comes back in time to make different choises and have some deserved joy or is everything going to be given in this life ? (pls, I don't think i can deal with a 80 year old Ryo who was a slave for his whole life :(((. ) Either way, the author writes well so the story will still be great that was just my preference. Thanks

I will be fair... I don't like the book it's too heavy for my taste but the immersiveness of this book is really high by the time I stopped I had actually read entire 26 chapters the quality is really good there are some mistakes but it's minute and with great immersion you won't even notice it stability of updates is too poor the author upload the chapter when ever he likes Story development is really good Character design is where this book really excel at if you don't feel anything for MC than you r not Human World background is not enough... If you don't know major characters and Naruto storyline you won't understand a thing Overall it's a heavy book that will make you feel empty for sometime after reading it... I can guarantee you won't smile or laugh for half a day if you read it also you might start to get nicer to your family for some time after reading this But not my cup of tea... I don't wanna read something this emotional

Unfortunately, the writing style destroys the story. Every sentence is "he did this" or "he did that". It leaves no room for world building, for creating backdrop, for painting a picture. We are essentially reading a report on a character. He experiences emotionally disturbing events, but we as the readers are unable to feel a connection, given the lack of any detail. I like the idea of the MC. I like the time frame it takes place during. I like that it doesn't center on the manga's significant characters. There is too much left wanting with this story though.

This Story made me cry because of the pain MC Felt. I wanted to hug him to relieve his pain. When the Story makes me cry And pity the main characters IT was definitely Worth reading.

The best Naruto fanfic i have read so far The focus is not on the action and there is very little of it, if you want action go read or watch the original, it focuses mostly on the emotional aspect and relationships, feels like the song "Hero of War" from Rise Against The writing is very good, there are a few mistakes but they are very minor and super rare, my guess made while blind typing, but the story is so immersive that you dont really notice them unless you stop reading for a bit IS NOT A HAREM, at least so far, and IS NOT ECCHI, it is very pure when it comes to love, but very realistic and appropriate WARNING: the story is really dark most of the time as it is a war period that the action is taking place in and the MC is not the typical OP MC that just sweeps everything that stands in his way like a tornado, he is more like a tactical missile, powerful but cant be everywhere or know everything over all: GRATE BOOK, no systems, no reincarnations, no bull**** stroke of luck scenarios, it feels like it belongs to the world it is written in

1 star for the ntr and beta mc. Mc is by far the strongest in konoha and yet when they decide to marry his lover to another man he does nothing about it and thinks its impossible to change the situation and just gives up on her and does nothing while she's getting ****ed by her new husband... And in his childhood he was tortured by danzo and yet after growing up and becoming far stronger than him he does nothing about it... What the **** is the point of him being that strong then???...

This story is amazing you'll be crying throughout the whole story. I was just crushed at what the mc has to endure through. I love this story and want moar chapters.

This dark story need a 5 star!!! ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Really great story! Although I didn't like the love between Mikoto and Ryo it was very emotional. I really hope you make a second book of how he was reanimated in the 4th great ninja war.

This was a great story so dont let anyone tell you otherwise. It is very rare for me to cry while reading so for me to cry 4 times already makes you top tier. Thank you.

Well, I don't usually write reviews but I know if I don't wrote for this one, I am going to regret it forever. This story is one hell of a roller coaster ride of sadness. It shows the reality hidden in the lives of shinobi. The MC just wanted one thing in life - A family; even that wish isn't fulfilled. This was also the best ending possible. I agree that a lot of alternate ending could have been possible. let's say - A happy ending; NO! he was broken and he wanted peace, his children would have difficulty accepting him... His love was married to someone else... She couldn't say to truth as it would hurt the pride of her current husband. Let's just stop speculating and let the feeling of this story sink in. Period.

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Good novel. Pros: 1. Different writing style (maybe bad for others, but it was like a breath of fresh air. 2. Story and ideas for progression are very good but is huge problem (read under cons) 3. Mc is designed cleverly and is a cool character. Cons: 1. This NOVEL has a BIG PROBLEM that is the power levels of Mc and other characters are not properly designed and are a ABSOLUTE MESS. AND THE MC IS TOO OVER POWERED TO HAVE AN ENDING LIKED THAT. (THE MC HAS THE TITLE GOD OF SHINOBI). Thanks for writing this fanfiction author(atleast 3/4 of novel is very good and last 1/4 of novel is something that I wish was never written)

Unfortunately, the writing style destroys the story. Every sentence is "he did this" or "he did that". It leaves no room for world building, for creating backdrop, for painting a picture. We are essentially reading a report on a character. He experiences emotionally disturbing events, but we as the readers are unable to feel a connection, given the lack of any detail. I like the idea of the MC. I like the time frame it takes place during. I like that it doesn't center on the manga's significant characters. There is too much left wanting with this story though.

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ok i want to like this novel but the way you make sentences hurts to read the story is nice and all but it moves to fast of a story line i feel you just need to work on the structure needs work like here They have poisoned the food. The clothes. The water. Everything. would it have been better if you put this like this They have poisoned the food. the clothes, the water, everything.

Please don't drop this fanfic.. And give notice if you take a break, and give notice if you want to prolong that break.. Don't worry too much about mean review