1 New life Rewrite

*Author note*

Hey guys! I hope you will like my new rewrite work! I will try my best, but you will still see a lot of grammar errors even when im now using Grammarly, so bear with it :D and From story content, I will try my best, but Im still amateur when it comes to writing fanfic or pretty much to any writing xD Btw feel free to leave comments, but please, when you have some misgiving about it, try to elaborate what I wrote wrong, ok? xD

No matter what, the lore is calling!

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"SPEAKING" Shock and different occasions when person cant control volume of his voice OR wants to be heard xD

""Speaking"" God/Divine/Eldrich/Entity being

((Thinking)) God/Divine/Eldrich/Entity being

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---3d pov--- means general pov from the third person

Ok, ok, now really storytime xD.

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Is it strange to wake up? Or was he already awake? He can't be sure as everything he can feel is nothing but the darkness of the void. It doesn't matter. He knows that he had a life once upon a time, even if he can't any longer remember, but just little snippets of it, and most of them are just some shows/games and works he read in his free time...

But that doesn't matter, and now he just floats in the void for seconds or millennia. The time measure is impossible in this place, so it was surprising that when he was about to have another long/short? Journey through the void just to kill time until he asleep again to feel something other than the coldness of the void.

*Warmth*

His entire being was absorbed by warmness like nothing he can remember and guiding him on the different path he wanted to take, and without thinking, he followed as this feeling is something he wishes to be near no matter the cost...

Was it a long or short time? he cants say, but he doesn't care as he follows the warmth like a moth to a flame

Until he can feel it stop, and with it, he stops himself, and for the first time, he looks around shocked as he was no longer in a void but in a vibrant garden full of life and warmth!

He was shocked that he was so absorbed in the following warmness that he didn't notice such a big change!

But as he looks around the garden, his eyes land on a lady near a water pond looking around twenty years old woman with long brown hair and vibrant green eyes with a mature yet young figure clad in white cloth in ancient greek style.

I can't avert my eyes from her, but not for her beauty. No, the reason she feels so ethereal is the warmness she radiates.

It's like nothing else mattered, not as long I can stay near her presence.

And in the meanwhile, I was nothing in her presence. I noticed she finally looked at me with the smile you can get from your loving mother.

""I can see my flames brought you there, young one. Tell me what such young and innocent soul doing in nothingness?""

She speaks in a language I never heard, but even still, I can understand, and her voice is so comforting. nudging me to answer her

"!"

But as I try to tell her, I find my voice lacking, and in the panic of angering her from not answering her and losing her warmness, I frantically try to look around just to find I don't have a body like her.

""Stop! You don't need to worry, young one. The fallout is me to bear as I never spoke with a mortal soul. Come and take a look at yourself in the water reflection, and in meanwhile, I will look on your memories.""

She says in a soothing voice, and even if my memories tell me it's a bad idea to let someone look into them, I can't help myself to even care. As such, I slowly float to her side and look into the pond and see nothing but a transparent ball of something? Its looks like smoke, and yet it's me...

And after I look at the lady again, I can see her face change from intriguing and confused and angry, until she stops at one of the pure happiness, and her warmth increases in comfort.

""Who could have thoughts that after such a long time, that I get this chance? Yes, even if my sisters assured me in sending help, I could never think, I never dared and hoped that you could finally come back to me, my dear Leylain.""

At that name, my mind hurts, and I get flashes of two beings, one of light and one of the dark, and just the mere memory of them bring something I almost forget, and that's a burning ANGER, but I can't remember why and in desperately seeking of answers I look back at her.

She just smiles and takes me into her arms, hugging me like a child and humming into my nonexistent ears.

""Shhh Shhh, It's alright, everything will be alright, my child, nobody can hurt you there.""

She says, between stroking my body? no matter how much he wants answers, you just can't wrap his nonexistent head in thinking how that works like your current body is nothing more than a ball of smoke, yet you clearly can feel her patting, and it seems she read your thoughts as she is chuckling lightly on your though process

""Yes, always the curious one, aren't you, my Leylain? you always wanted to find answers to everything, and you always find the most trivial thing the most interesting.""

She says, and I can't help but wonder how she knows you as even if you can't remember much of your past life, you are sure you would not forget her if you met her even if once...

At that thought, your mind wanders to the flashes of light one and dark one, and once again, you could feel the anger but now more clearly, and now you could feel pain too.

""Do not think of them, my child. I know you want to know, but it's not time yet. After all, you don't even remember my name, do you?""

She chuckles at my embarrassment, but then she let me go on the ground, and I can't help but want to be once again held by her, but when I want to make my intentions make clear, she kneels against me and starts speaking.

""My name is Gaea, the personification and will of earth or more commonly know as Gaia, the mother of earth.""

She says, and at that name, I froze as every legend and fact/fiction I read about her, but before I can reach a conclusion, she continues.

""And your name, my child is Leylain, but others knows you as magical Ley line, you are the personification of something that these two bullies tried to take for themselves and failed, you are the will of magic, you are my sole direct child.""

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