XiaoYuFu
Only on chapter 2 right now. This story shows promise (that and I'm curious about ML and how they met). I can't say much with only 2 chapters, it I can say I like MC's persona. When she's stressed she torchures and kills novel characters ( rewrites their stories) which gets her both hate and fans ( wonder what'll happen when she's gone). Haven't seen her in th system world yet. Can't wait for more ❤️
I decided to give this novel a try, because everything in the world deserves a chance. Also it tickled my fancies w Anyway so it started out fine, just hm potential potential, let's continue reading. and then, it just, went downhill I just made a reallllllllly lengthy review about plot holes in another original novel, so i'm not going to go in depth, but seriously it's- how do you hack into someone??? you hack a computer a machine a device. Someone????? Also @author please get an editor, the english was tolerable at first and then it's just what??? Release me > Realise me, grabbed > graved, dictionary? Grammarly is mostly free you know? Also the speed was too fast, unbelievably fast. It went from i don't want to deal with you despite knowing you're MC and i know you're probably plotting someone against me so let's just watch - to - I CANT DO WITHOUT YOU LETS MAKE OUR ENGAGEMENT OFFICIAL No explanation on the process. THE PROCESS IS WHATS DOKI, THATS THE MOST IMPORTANT, THE END RESULT IS JUST PART OF IT. Additionally, the author likes to contradict themselves when they say 'System was now loyal to its master' and 'No second thought into selling out their master to the ML'. wtf yo. no explanation on why the ML smells really nice to the system? System sold out its owner with just a bloody cat pillow, wtf?? Cats are temperamental but this is overboard. (I like the cat part tho lol)
Nos muestran a una protagonista amante de los animales, a la cual al parecer ¿Le gustan las luchas? O cualquier otra cosa que pueda quitar su aburrimiento, el ML es simplemente hermoso, aunque me gustó más el del arco de la pintura, además de que sus padres también son una pareja muy linda. Sigan actualizando por favor..................................... .............................. ........................ ...................
This novel is great! I really like it, mainly because: 1- It hasn´t followed the typicals of the quick transmigration genre, being real fresh. AND 2- The interactions between the MC and ML are just my fit. So... I am looking forward to the nest chapter! Please author/writer don´t leave us hanging XD