Rock, Paper, Scissors [GL]

Hello! This is a novel I decided to write and post here after receiving a contract offer for Webnovel. I hope that you enjoy the story and what it has to offer. Please keep in mind I am a student with many other things going on in life, so I do ask you to be considerate when reviewing. However any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.

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I dislike romance, it is easier to read when it is LGBT though. (I’m more of a BL person so I don’t do GL really). I got to say your story is really cute. Even as they question love and stuff, the writing style makes me think how cute and fluffy your story is. It is very interesting and would keep a reader, who like stories like this, hooked. Your grammar is good with a few mistakes that are no that noticeable and fits with a but of your style of writing. Although I wouldn’t read stories with this style of writing, it is still cute and leave readers with a nice feeling. Keep up the good work!

Really nice story in a light novel style, with tons of fluff and drama. I always enjoyed reading manga or webtoons with this sort of plot, and reading this webnovel is just as good :)

The author writes an attention-grabbing romance novel with unique protagonists as well as a unique plot. I find it interesting how the story switches between the perspectives of the two main characters, so we can always see a different side to a situation that is being presented. Nice writing :)

Hi! I enjoyed reading your novel, I was amazed of how you start your story it gave me an idea of what to expect next, I think this is my first think LGBT book but overall I enjoyed it <3 this story really gives me the feels. I look forward to your constant update~ keep going author!

Good night! I must say that this is my first time reading an LGBT-themed story. However, I have been delighted with your story, the way you show the characters, and how little by little their relationship begins to emerge. Keep it up, you're doing great!

Is my first time reading GL but I'm glad I did, is actually captivating... I love how clear the author describes everything from the characters to the back ground. The story flows smoothly and each character is lovable... great story! Keep up with the good work

I've always been a fan of romance novels and this is definitely right up my alley. I'm surprised at how well written this story is and how developed the characters are. I'm excited to see where this goes.

GL isn't my usual cup of tea, but I still found it relatable and engaging. (I tend to watch a lot of anime and the story draws heavy tropes from light-novels) The style is fluid and the grammar doesn't detract from the reading which automatically puts this novel among the top bracket on the website. Overall an A grade work shaping up to be a good story!

This is literally the first girl love story that I ever read, and I enjoyed reading it. The only thing I wish was a little different is the size of the paragraphs. Sometimes, on computer, it can be a little bit harder to read large paragraphs, so maybe break the paragraphs up. I also found switching from her thoughts to her actions a little bit jarring. I think keeping the topic of the paragraph more uniform might help. For instance, when you want to show her thinking, make it its own paragraph, and then actions can happen on other paragraphs. Other than that, I feel like it has potential, and I like the thought evoking introductions and overall the tenderness of the prose. It made me feel warm inside and stuff. :)

Love, love, love it! Such an amazing story and I cannot wait for more! You're doing such a great job. Honestly, I didn't even know that I needed this book in my life. [img=recommend]

From the jump, the story is very intriguing. I tend not to read GL a lot since it's not as popular as BL, but this is cute. I already started to like the girl with the purple eyes as soon as she was introduced to the story. There were some grammatical errors and I was confused at some points, but the story is too good so I was able to ignore it. I can't wait for more chapters, keep up the good work Author!

Awesome fluffy goodie! Though I'm not a fan of this genre, it was somewhat easy for the eyes. Good dialogues and clear cut descriptions is a big plus. I'll lurk in the darkness and strike when more chappies are out again. May the author write more, learn more, and edit more!

The author has done a great job with this well written story. From the beginning you fall right into it with ease. You could say it's a colorful story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy. Great job, author!

First of all, your grammar is great and your writing flows really well and it's easy to read. The characters are well developed and I love how it's written from both main characters' point of view. That's really unique and enjoyable and great for getting in their heads. I also love how your writing style is totally different for the two characters. It really makes them feel like separate people and you can immediately tell who's speaking even if you didn't know beforehand. There's a lot of telling instead of showing in this book, especially from Aka's point of view. Even straight off the bat, she says the city is lively and wonderful compared to her small town, along with many other things. That can be good for developing her way of viewing the world, but a city being "wonderful and lively" doesn't paint as solid of a picture as saying something like "the throngs of bustling, happy people and joyous conversation feel so fresh compared to the quiet hum of my small town home." As such, the world isn't as well developed as the characters. Just work on that and you're all set! This is a great novel and I wish you luck in your journey <3

It's a nice story! After reading a few chapters, I'm questioning myself about love. It has a lot of potentials if you can expand more theory. So far, so good.excelent work.

Not sure where my last review went, but hopefully this one doesn't disappear! After reading your fanfiction on Wattpad, I was sad to see you took a break from writing. I was so happy to see you started a new novel, and I didn't mind coming to a new app just to read it. That aside, the story is rather unique and I like that you decided to write in the perspectives of both of the protagonists. I enjoy reading the fluff and romance, though I'm eagerly awaiting the little twists you decide to implement later in the story. Hope with the support you're receiving, you'll stay motivated to keep writing!

Truthfully, i had never read anything about this genre before, but i can say its really great! The characters are well build and unique, its total romance and full of fluff, love it! Good job Author! Keep updating more!!

Omg! This story grasped my heart it the characters are so well written I couldn't put it down. I can not wait for more updates! I love the fact that it is like a light novel. So please all give this a read!