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READ IT READ IT READ IT Important things are said thrice. I am in love with Elizabeth the main lead. She is too good and all the other characters too. It is totally unjustified to try and express this story in words. I am now only 10 chapters in and my expectations have grown to a whole new level. Gonna Binge, You guys should read it too.
This is a hidden GEM! This is a work of art!!!, seriously this novel has everything, Every chapter is" PERFECT" This novel is really interesting and entertaining, I really suggest you to read this. I am patiently patiently waiting for the author to update soon !! Author, you have written such an incredible novel
FL has got the spirit. I loved her character, but it is too early for me to tell about characters, as most of em not even teenage. they re all kids. Lets hope they will be a character and make us wonder with their choices in the predicaments. I gave five to all because author-san was really good at quality writing, stability of updates, story development, character design and world background. I hope you even make it better. it is added my library. Fighting!
WOW! Such potential to be one of legends.. I am so impressed with the way that the author sets mood and details of each scenes. Just Amazing! Great weaving of plot development and world-building. You cannot teach this skill because it is just simply an innate talent. And you've got it! Please do not be discouraged at start because I am telling you, you have a great talent in writing! To all readers, give this story a chance! Must-read! 10/10
To the review! The good: I like the overall story. The hints of things past and things to come, the troubled heroine, her interactions with various characters, these all help make the world come alive for me. It's hard not giving away anything of the story itself, but I'm thoroughly enjoying it. The bad: Word choice is a bit strange. As an example, I'm going to re-write your first paragraph here the way I'd have written it. She wiped at drool mindlessly with her tiny palm. It had been such a good rest; this was beyond doubt. After such a good night's sleep, well, someone was in a good mood. It had been a perfect, complete night of rest! Compared to the previous night, she was quite satisfied. It's just little things here and there, but as long as 'the bad' looks it really isn't enough to call it 'bad'. Overall: The only thing that I could find to critique was word choice, as it sounds strange to me. Updates are happening at a steady pace. The story has developed in explosively good ways, over all grammar is good, the story is readable. I enjoy the character designs and how they interact like real people would in that situation. Finally, I'm enjoying the world you've shared with us. Almost perfect marks, I look forward to reading more!