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Reviews of Rise to Supremacy

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Rise to Supremacy

SeijiHaruta_sama

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I was hoping to read an actual prologue that explains and introduces the main character. But we don't know anything about the main character other than what the synopsis tells us. I hope this is addressed in later chapters. Again, another prime example of what not to do in a synopsis. The synopsis is a guideline, a description, a summary of the story, not an actual introduction to the story. Introducing the character in the synopsis is a big no-no for me. Sure, we get to learn that the character is a big NEET, but the story itself doesn't explain that at all. The prologue seems more like a continuation of the synopsis and that is a big turn-off for readers of literature.

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