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Crazy Old Drunk

"ugghhh it can't be morning already. It's entirely too dark for it to be morning. Huh? What's going on?". as Zack looks around he notices there is nothing around him. it's all pitch black. no pillow, no bed, not even his room. just floating in an empty void.

"yup, I'm still asleep. good, I didn't feel like being up just yet" 'WHAT DO YOU SEEK'. as Zack was thinking to himself he heard a deep booming voice. "yup I'm definitely still sleeping. fuck it I'll play along. POWER. ALL THE POWER OF THE WORLD" Zack yelled, then busted out laughing. "hahaha how cliche of me. such an obvious answer. HEY CAN I GET A DO OVER?" Zack yelled into the darkness but all he got in return was the sound of an alarming bell.

5a.m. Monday February 18, 2018. Zack woke up full of grogginess, teetering to his bathroom mirror. He had a normal build, not too skinny and not too fat. he had black braided hair and brown eyes. he was dark skinned with no facial hair. finishing his daily routine of washing up, Zack walks on his way to school and sees some old man sitting up against a wall resting his eyes. thinking nothing of it he keeps walking. "aye young man. I know you ain't gonna walk right past me like I ain't even here."

Half annoyed and half amused, Zack walks back and stands in front of the old man. "old man, you smell like moon shine, I know you don't plan on asking me for money" with Zack's posture and his habbit of keeping his hands in his pockets he looked like a delinquent bullying the homeless.

"young punks now n'days have no respect for their elders. listen to me boy, I'm old so I've seen plenty of terrible things, don't I deserve a beer?" sizing up the old man all Zack See's is a dilapidated old man with long white hair wearing a long black robe. looking closer he realizes he can't see his hands or feet under the robe as if there is nothing there. Not wanting to think more into it he starts to walk away. "I don't have time today old man. I got school to get to." just before Zack leaves the range of the old man's voice he hears the old man's voice and it makes him pause. "fine then continue to float in the darkness."

hi this is my first book. so please feel free to send feed back and let me know what changes I can make for future chapters.

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