Reviews of Rise of the White Dragon
Rise of the White Dragon
Lruska
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Until this point it is an okay story. Don't make it harem. The MC should get powerful over many years since he is thousand of years old and not in a couple of months. MC should become the most powerful human from Earth pretty quick before the towers and other worlds merge together. Also a random girl he teaches cultivation can not keep up in speed of cultivation with an old demon. And please don't add unnecessary drama or random encounters and cliche things. Another thing is to remember the age of MC when writing his character so he doesn't act like child. Good luck π
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it starts off very well, though the premise is obviously not new, the mc seems mature & driven, but after a few chapters the book unsurprisingly degraded, it's the usual op regressor mc with years of future knowledge doing his "best" to change the future, and I don't have any problem with that, the overall plot also written quite well, as for grammar I don't have competency to assess, but the little bits & pieces of story spices details that made me cringed hard & left me wondering if the author was a horny & hedonistic teenager, firstly the constant overly glorified mc, yes it's normal for people to admire good looking & well-off individuals, but for side characters & passerby to constantly mention how handsome & beautiful the main characters are in the exact same lines is not only really cringy, it also made the world & the inhabitants seems even less interesting than it already is, if you insist to constantly glorify mc, at least be more creative , rather than the usual copy pasted "he looks so handsome" passerby comments, use variations, like describing how people looks at him with shining eyes, or hushed voices and giggles from the girls, couples arguing, bystanders taking pictures, bad dad jokes of introducing their daughter to mc, or even hyperbole like drooling over him is ok once in a long while, there are literally plethora of these things. And then my biggest concern, the half-assed unrealistic perfectionism, good story conclusion is understandably desired, but poorly thought unrealistic good ending is worse than well thought & realistic bad one, The examples are conclusion of Mc's uncle story, its bad, but not that bad, and then Monica's, it's among the worst sh*t I've ever read, it's poorly thought, irresponsible, and unrealistic. Both made a pattern.
Great book so far! Cultivation wise it's nothing really new but intriguing. The MC is mature and yet playful when it comes to his family. He's not afraid to kill which is a plus in my books albeit it's only when someone crosses him or his family ( not for the slightest of things) I can't really speak on world building so far since the apocalypse hasn't happened yet but the relationships between MC and sides are heart warming. Overall it looks like the direction of this book is gonna go smoothly also it doesn't look like the author is going for a harem style relationship. But I hope that doesn't turn you off this book. I'd rate this worth reading and it doesn't feel like same old same old Cultivation novel. Trust me just look at how many books I've "read" on this app lol keep up the great work author looking forward to the end of the world! or in some cases the beginning :p
it's very good, I just don't understand the reason for not being a harem, I mean the MC will live for at least 3 thousand years, it is very unrealistic for him to have only one wife, especially if he is very powerful and has a high status, a MC who will live only 80 years like a normal person so it makes sense to have only 1 wife, you have to be very crazy to find out who a 3,000 year old monster will be faithful and have only one woman, not to mention that the MC before of rebirth could not have ***, a world of cultivation without a small harem of 3 or 4 wives is very strange
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Godlike novel right here! I have read your other novel before and I have to say that it doesn't even come close to this ( no offense ). This one right here needs to be placed on top of the novel rankings. The potential of this one is amazing. Its good that there's no harem. IngridxLuan is going to be one hell of a power couple in the future. More power to the author! Hope we get 3 chaps a day tho ;)
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umm for adding haram to this book is not good as mc is over 1000 years old and little romance ok but too much will spoil the mood to continue reading.. I hope you can find my suggestion agreeable.. beside that the background of the story is very good π with nice character design n its history...development being only 1 star I don't like too much romance