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I really enjoyed this story, but the last few chapters seem rushed. I wonder if there will be more from this author. I like that each character has a full personality and the choices they make reflect that. I wish there had been more interactions between the leaders and Xun as well as between the humans and the vampires. This novel could have been stretched out twice all long!
Story starts slowly and then 60+ chapters in goes on faster than speed train. Adventure-mystery during acopalypse. Right now it seems that vapires are fighting/eating/experimenting on or with humans who are almost extinct. Oh and werewolves, other monsters and differend experiment viruses here. Mc is human 12 year boy with complicated past. There are some side characters that author messes with our mc. The update is very stable for the novel. The issue I find here is that people seem to change personalities during the story. Also backround people are plain stupid. Also plot upun plot upon plot may make me at least feel like there are plotholes. Well whatever complaints I have, I still am suprised how fiew people have read this. Its not bad novel and there are almost 100 chapters already. I think that if the author learns spacing of the story and thinks more about character tempers the novels he publishes may be good for high ranking lists here.
In a website predominantly dominated by super powered heroes, this is a welcome respite. It's a story that tells of how an orphaned 'ordinary' human fights for survival. Characters are Fleshed out, and the world building is detailed. It's not a fast pace action novel, but one that keeps you connected with it's regular tinge of mysterious excitement. Plus there are vampires.
Finally finished this! Whew what a ride. So, this novel have a lot plot twist I really enjoying it. After this I might read Bob's story because he seems like a cool character. The pace is good, there is no unnecessary part, all the character have their own personality and the plot did fit until the end (although I am curious about the leader's secret but oh well) and the ending is satisfying. Here, take this solid 5* from me
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A really good novel with 100 chapters we have characters who stay realistic and the MC's evolution and learning are quite nice, the world they live in is really well made too and is one of the best that I have seen for post-apocalyptic settings. However I did feel that the end was kinda rushed but still pretty good. đ
Though there are grammar issues, I believe the story itself outweighs the incorrect spelling by far. It keeps you interested, while not being over the top. Definitely a good dread. To top it off I'm very thankful I haven't had to pay ss to read the chapters. That's a godsend. Thank you author for being generous.
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