Rise of the Eternal

Follow the journey of a being feared by all of existance as reincarnates into a new world and strives to once again be the being known as the god of Death. But this time He wants to surpass his former self and be supreme. hello everyone author here this is my first book and i dont know how good or bad this is going to be. So i would like your openion on this and i will be greatful if you could say what you disliked and you may also advice me. THANK YOU and have a nice day.