The first prologue gives a good idea of what the world is and where the characters will be going in the future. The writing is done well I only found one type but then again I might be the one in wrong. Emotions are portrayed well and the plot has been set in motion. I'll be sure to keep updating my reviews as I continue reading on.
Ahhh! I love this so much! I couldn't read much beyond the prologue at this second because I'm at work, but OMG! This is such a small thing, but I truly love how at the beginning it tells where we are, the year, etc. Love that! This author has truly created their own world, and I'm ready to read more! soon as I get off from work!
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alright here my review the story is interesting and well detail in the long chapters which is also good, but you don't want to make that to long unless it a epic fight happening. Character are good looking forward to learning more about them. Don't understand why the prologue was turn into 5 part hopefully the author could explain that.
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This is my first novel so far. Personally I think this will be worth a read and I hope most of you will at least give it a chance. If it feels like it isn't your cup of tea after the first 5 chapters or so, I completely understand. It would be much appreciated if you guys would comment on what you liked or disliked in the novel, so that I can try to improve myself. I'm not a native English speaker so there probably will be some grammatical errors so I hope you can just ignore them and focus on the story itself instead.