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I really like the novel đđ, it allows me to explore my imaginations to some certain level or extent, though am not a kid, but little wild imaginations won't hurt right đâș. Love †the characters (đȘLEO) and the rest. Love how the writer adds new characters to the novel and how the writer makes new plots very interesting đâș. But TO THE WRITER:- You have little problems with your spellings and sentences some times, but still great with exploiting your vocabularies đȘ. The major problem am having is the "OVER EXPLANTIONS" the writer makes when explaining certian things like kingdoms, cities even villages and towns, and even still "OVER EXPLAINING" something or someone that has already been explained. Sometimes even "OVER EXPLAINING" people who are sometimes not really relevant in the novel, making we the readers tired to some extent and sometimes skipping the non important information and sometimes makes the novel a bit bulky. Try reducing the "OVER EXPLAINING" problem. It most times covers more parts of a chapter or episode đ©. But never the less I love the novel â€â€â€â€đđȘ. Kudos!!! Keep up the good workđ.
I love your story bro, it is my first time reading a webnovel and the character and the worldbuilding is great. I like concept of humanity as a whole getting isekied or teleported to new world. keep up the great work, am still reading the chapters. if u have time be sure to check my novel also[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I remember reading this, I was awestruck, really. the stories were filled with amazing characters. I'm still thankful for that one guy who recommended this story to me from fb. the intention of re reading this seems to never cross my mind before. but now I'm guaranteed that I want to read your story again. kudos to you Author! [img=Loving it]
First if all, I have only read this novel up to chapter 29 and I donât plan to read further. My review is based on that. Truthfully I would like only to rate this novel but I need to write a review to do so, so I try to do some decent work while trying not to spoil anything for those who give this novel a try. Writing quality: Mediocre up to this points with minor mistakes. Grammar is readable, author promised grammar improvements after chapter 100. Updating Stability: As far as I checked updates were stable. Story development: The story is full of flaws, mistakes, illogical character interactions, decisions and events. M Character design: While the author said MC matured early because of events he is childish. Main female lead is stupid, the enemies all behave like spoiled, stupid brats. Word setup: Lot of errors, overly simplified parts and bad illogical designs. The novel felt like a creation of a very very very novice authorâs first try. This should be rewritten at least until the parts I got to. For the rest I cannot give an opinion. Would I recommend this? No. There are much better choices I think.