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Hi everyone Welcome to my novel♥️💐♥️ I am an egyptian writer and i am now writing my new novel Rioneed in Arabic I am translating the chapters myself , so although i have reached over chapter 200 in Arabic version i can not publish alot daily but im working hard to finish as much chapters as possible daily I hope you like my novel and i hope my translation won’t stop you from enjoying it💐💐 I appreciate your support and i hope to hear your thoughta and opinions all the time♥️ Good luck in your journey at Rioneed ♥️♥️
This novel is amazing i read it before in arabic till ch150 and now I can't miss the chance to read it again . The mc isn't OP ,the plot is unpredictable but make sense, the world building is 5 star and u will get shocked as every thing reveals itself as the story develop You can't miss this great work , give it a chance
Hello my loyal readers This is chapter 200 celebration review It has been a hell of a journey throughout these short period .. nearly month and half since i started this story. I have now written 204 chapters to the moment and nearly 320k words I hope u liked my novel so far Now, i want to celebrate with you. So i need your suggestions about how to do that. Would you like me to write a side story? Pnro? Or another one related to the hidden mysteries to the novel? Do you want a mass release? 10 chapters in oneday perhaps? Just tell me what do you think and i will try to make your wishes come true I will wait for one more week then i will tell you about the final rewards i chose from your suggestions Keep supporting me and ibro, the journey has just begun Happy journey in my novel world Thx for your support so far, it means a alot to me.
Excellent beginning - interesting worldbuilding, immediate ten.sio.n, a race against time! A VR game used to invade other countries. Do I hear echoes of Ender's Game? I'd like to hear how a VR game invasion managed to make it into RL. The MC is racing to get strong enough to beat an invasion of VR players on his country. But then, things get more complicated, and matters appear that are greater than the fate of a single country or a single person. This novel has layered mysteries, and the MC traveling back in time to participate in a VR game that destroyed countries is just the beginning. I read the brain journey thing and went ah, is this going to be like Knowhere? Unfortunately it wasn't and I stopped reading. I wrote this review instead, haha! As for the MC, Ibrahim is the determined sort of person. He's definitely the kind hero type, not a trash MC. There's not a lot of character development at first; it is the plot that keeps the story moving forward in the first several volumes. Minor problems in formatting - capitalization and punctuation mostly. Could be ignored, and it gets better, but there's a lot in the beginning. Still, I definitely recommend this novel. Great read!
This is a great read! MC doesn't get sent back to the past once, but twice, which makes seeing him adapting to this situation really interesting. I like the world building. Would like to see a faster pace in these types of 'vr novels', would not like a read multiple chapters of grinding. The dialogue could be better written as well. All in all, would recommend! Happy reading!