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author said that he didn't want to kill someone who want to kill mc, imo its make mc look like a floor mat that someone can do anything to him without fighting back.

I will try to be the most direct, it will contain some text to make a review at least acceptable, it will contain some slight spoilers until chapter 5, I am using google translator so forgive my mistakes. the writing quality is very good but the development and personality is not the best, and the story is following the cannon with gon and killua in hunter exam, not to mention the background that literally doesn't exist until the chapter I read (chapter 6) and I found 4 problems that made me give up on this story the first being the background itself, to be more exact the MC background, the MC just has no history and starts with him in the heaven arena at 12 years old all of a sudden, maybe this will be explained in future chapters but for me, an MC that we don't even understand where he came from, where he is going, or why he is going is a big problem second, the MC simply says yes to a man who offers to train him out of the blue after showing Nen's existence, in exchange for the MC doing him a favor, which is not made clear, and the MC in all his wisdom doesn't try to know more, the favor could be anything and the MC doesn't think about it, the MC has no sense of caution or suspicious thinking about the man who came out of nowhere and goes with him like a child (who he is) following a kidnapper who offered sweets third, similar to his problem accepting training from the random man who became his master shortly thereafter, when he follows his master to a party due to the master having to find someone, the MC is approached by a random girl who invites the MC to accompany her somewhere because her sister wants to meet him, as smart as ever the MC accepts without thinking twice with the wise reason of having nothing to do while waiting for his master, the MC is almost killed by this girl to learn to be an idiot. fourth, when the MC is about to be killed his master appears and saves him, the girl cries and regrets having "tested" the MC and asks his master for mercy... which is granted... even the enemy is exceptionally dumb to cause such a problem and provoke someone who shouldn't and she still survives, she has a plot armor or something?, and as if that wasn't enough as they walk away she decides she's going to chase the MC... here's the recipe for xianxia villain that will cause problems until it dies Now think about it, the MC gets into a fight and is almost killed for a nonsensical reason like testing him in which she threatens to kill him if he doesn't complete her little game, he almost gets killed, and instead of the master of the MC kill her because she was disrespectful like she almost killed her disciple in a party he just lets her go and she still decides to cause more trouble in the future? the author also seemed to want the MC to become just like the killua with all the skills of murder, claws, etc, he even kills a guy the same way killua kills johness by ripping out his heart but for some reason, he didn't make him a zoldyck (no background or history as I said before), add all this to the previous problems and I come to the conclusion that the only thing tested in chapter five was my patience, which unfortunately is low, especially with stupid MC's

I like how you started out this book at Heaven’s Area. I haven’t read one like that yet and the character has a good personality too! 5 stars

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Ummm, good but it can be improved. Anyway love to see people writing HxH fanfic. Hope to see this work will be much more appreciated. So i'll support to make it not starless since being starless will discourage potential readers from clicking it (most starless works are dropped very fast)

At first I wanted to drop this, but I continued readingm the major porblem I have is that the "villans" are all reatred, well not just them is like everyone have a very very low IQ, and for some reason the "villans" are all crazy and laugh while they are dying.

its good, the character is original and it has more than the plot that hunter hunter usually has. world baacground: hunterxhunter. update stabilty: fricken good 5 to 7 chapters a week, the author puts a lot of work into this and I appreciate it.

Pretty good overall as the start is very crisp to remember including how the mc feels overall and handles problems. Honestly, this fanfic is good in my opinion so give it a read and see you feel about it. (Also keep up the good work author!)

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Love a good HxH fanfic. Good story so far, if anything I would've liked a more flushed out and original hatsu but im looking forward to seeing how it develops.

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Webnovel rating sucks, so I can only give you 2.2 stars. In general, this should be around 3/5 but yeah. First of all, the tone is bland. It has almost no soul. It is just a description of events without any emotion to it. It feels more like a summary than anything else. It has no emotional influence on the reader and it just feels weird. I am only at chapter 16, so I don't know much about the plot, but it seems to be pretty standard for a native of hxh without memories. Character design is almost ignored. Everyone has a few features and that is it. No complexity, no motivation, nothing that speaks to the reader to make him want to read. There is no passion in the MC, just mechanical emotions. I don't really care what he does, but I want to know why and have some reason behind it. The MC is foolish and doesn't think through things. He isn't careful about his actions, he just does them. This might be good for some, but to me it repels me from reading. The world background is lacking. It is just a stock fanfiction world with no depth, no new concepts, no explanations behind the plot holes in HxH, nothing. It isn't thought out and the author, there is nothing beneath the surface. Well, this is only my opinion. Do whatever you want.

author said that he didn't want to kill someone who want to kill mc, imo its make mc look like a floor mat that someone can do anything to him without author said that he didn't want to kill someone who want to kill mc, imo its make mc look like a floor mat that someone can do anything to him without