Hello readers! Yes, that's right, it's the author here writing in my own review box... Just want to point out, I am not an experienced writer. What I write will most likely have a few mistakes regarding spelling and punctuation. Therefore, Although, I'm not aiming for anything too professional I am willing to improve. I'm open to critique...just not too harsh my fellow people I do have feelings as well (ノ﹏ヽ) Thank you all so much for reading my story and hope you enjoy! P.S. I am unfamiliar with the history of ancient China. However, I've done some research beforehand in order to represent to you proper information and understanding! If I am to make any mistakes along the way on the information, please inform me! I want accurate information. I don't offend anyone and wish to bring out the best in my settings.
This is probably one of the top best original stories I've read on here thus far. The way the author writes is very descriptive and creates a visual in the reader's mind. It's nothing like your typical lighthearted historical novel. It has a dark edgy side to it as well as a warmth. The character portrays realistic traits, love, hatred, weakness, strength, and her vulnerable side. She's a stoic character but will crack when those she cares for are involved. I will say however, there are a few grammatical mistakes, but overall they're easy to read. This story really brings in emotions in the writing. It's also slow-paced but in a good way. Developing a proper connection with the characters relationships and giving you a view of her journey. It's dark at most times but also has many humorous scenes. I would give this story a read if you're interested in a strong and vulnerable character. Please keep writing author!
...I only need to read the summary to know that it's pretty much a copy of Song of the Long March. - Uncle killed her family to become Emperor, check. - She hides as a boy under the protection of a former general, check. - She becomes a valued strategist, check. - She falls in love with the general of an enemy country, check. I wish people who claim to write original novels actually used original plots instead of taking from others.
One of the most promising original novels published in Qidian. Great writing! Interesting characters and plots! Talented author! What do you wish for? If you want romance then this novel has it... Historical drama? A kickass female lead? I strongly recommend you to read this novel! You'll finish it in one sitting. Such grearlt authorb KUDOS!! 🙌👏👏
I am completely in love with this novel and the author!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 The main character, and her fierce nature are amazing. Its so refreshing and inspiring to see a character like that. I sincerely hope she reunites with Ju quickly though... Their separation is causing too much of a heartache for me. Hope that the male lead can still accept Rin after knowing she's a female...
I absolutely love this book. The author goes at a slow enough pace to where you can develop relationships and understandings of the characters . The book has a wonderful plot . Dear author please write more you are excellent at writing cliffhangers I don’t think my little heart can take it any longer .