Reviews of RIN

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Hello readers! Yes, that's right, it's the author here writing in my own review box... Just want to point out, I am not an experienced writer. What I write will most likely have a few mistakes regarding spelling and punctuation. Therefore, Although, I'm not aiming for anything too professional I am willing to improve. I'm open to critique...just not too harsh my fellow people I do have feelings as well (ノ﹏ヽ) Thank you all so much for reading my story and hope you enjoy! P.S. I am unfamiliar with the history of ancient China. However, I've done some research beforehand in order to represent to you proper information and understanding! If I am to make any mistakes along the way on the information, please inform me! I want accurate information. I don't offend anyone and wish to bring out the best in my settings.


Whoa, this is very promising! The way you write is also really good. It just sucks the readers in! Ah but too bad I found this too early. The wait for updates is gonna be a pain but I think your story is worth it. Keep it up!


This is probably one of the top best original stories I've read on here thus far. The way the author writes is very descriptive and creates a visual in the reader's mind. It's nothing like your typical lighthearted historical novel. It has a dark edgy side to it as well as a warmth. The character portrays realistic traits, love, hatred, weakness, strength, and her vulnerable side. She's a stoic character but will crack when those she cares for are involved. I will say however, there are a few grammatical mistakes, but overall they're easy to read. This story really brings in emotions in the writing. It's also slow-paced but in a good way. Developing a proper connection with the characters relationships and giving you a view of her journey. It's dark at most times but also has many humorous scenes. I would give this story a read if you're interested in a strong and vulnerable character. Please keep writing author!


The story is so nice. But it would be better if there are more updates. This story just leaves you wanting to read more of it. The character is alsi very well described


...I only need to read the summary to know that it's pretty much a copy of Song of the Long March. - Uncle killed her family to become Emperor, check. - She hides as a boy under the protection of a former general, check. - She becomes a valued strategist, check. - She falls in love with the general of an enemy country, check. I wish people who claim to write original novels actually used original plots instead of taking from others.


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I really like how Rin is going it's really cool. Thank you author cause I really like female protagonist as lead in stories. I really like the Rin character. Hope to see more of it.😊


One of the most promising original novels published in Qidian. Great writing! Interesting characters and plots! Talented author! What do you wish for? If you want romance then this novel has it... Historical drama? A kickass female lead? I strongly recommend you to read this novel! You'll finish it in one sitting. Such grearlt authorb KUDOS!! 🙌👏👏


This may 2nd or3rd time writing a review for this story this a mast read you will not regret it a mazig fl amazing story line writer is absolutely genius 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗


Love this story!! This is a gender bender story where the ML is strong, tough, smart, strategic, and good with martial arts. Practically no romance yet. Not sure echo the MC will be.


It's my first time to write a review because I want to save my first to a novel which greatly interest me. Praise the author🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏... may you update soon


I am completely in love with this novel and the author!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 The main character, and her fierce nature are amazing. Its so refreshing and inspiring to see a character like that. I sincerely hope she reunites with Ju quickly though... Their separation is causing too much of a heartache for me. Hope that the male lead can still accept Rin after knowing she's a female...


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Want to read moreeeeee. Huhuhuhu Madly waiting for your update author. Everytime I read this story , I've been anxiously hoping that there is more chapters will be left.And Ms. Author I want you to know that I'll be supporting this till the end.


Captivating and great story... you're the best! Good luck with more writing.... thank you for sharing! tc!


I wonder who's going to capture RIN's heart. Haha. Truly admit I am waiting for her love interest. 😅😘 Hoping for more actions. Thaks.NYAHAHAHAHAHAHHA


Im really hooked with this story. I just read this on wattpad this morning and i cant get enough. The way you write is promising and the development of the story is very good and that makes me want to read more.


Awesome book written by a very creative and interactive author. Highly recommend for all looking for a strong female lead and a book that doesn't solely focus on the relationship between the ML and FL, but on her growth from a young, helpless girl to a fearsome warrior


I absolutely love this book. The author goes at a slow enough pace to where you can develop relationships and understandings of the characters . The book has a wonderful plot . Dear author please write more you are excellent at writing cliffhangers I don’t think my little heart can take it any longer .


Very very very good story the female lead is a kickass person and the malelead is so powerful its so intresting plz morreee updates as early as possible