Eshal_Shahnawaz
I cannot remember whether I have read a spy themed romance novel before. But reading this makes me want to explore more of it. I often find this kind of formula in things like K drama and such, but having it transform to a written form, the author was able to encapsulate what cannot be seen in different media.
There's only 2 chapters out at the moment, so I can't really say much about stability of updates or story development, so I'll keep them at 4 for now. The writing quality could use some work, minor grammatical mistakes etc., but it's still readable. Character design and world background are both great and unique. The book's title drew me in, and the author did not fail to meet my high expectations. Keep it up, author!
Overall: The story is quite captivating. It's one that promises action and adventure. I love the main protagonist. And I also like the exchange between the colleagues. It makes it more relaxing. That said, I've noticed some subtle errors that you may need to correct. Most of them are typos. For example instead of *at* you write as. And ommision as well. But these aren't enough to dampen the story