Phoenix Essence Sweet
Lol if ur looking for a mary sue female lead and a cold male lead that MAGICALLY falls in love at first with the fmc then read this 😂😂 this story is so silly its killing the few brain cells i have. No offense but i feel like its written by a 15 years old ****ger for 9 year olds. Seriously who falls in love at the first paragraph of the novel 😂😂😂 at least it made me laugh at how the personlity of the SUPPOSEDLY cold male lead changed 180 degrees after the first chapter. Dropping it ! Peace ✌️
I've read till chapter 30 and tbh, I give up. The notion of little to no misunderstanding is interesting but the story it self is so lacking. No depth at all. Just from the first 5 chapters, we can see the events are highly illogical with no further explanation given. The plot is full of holes, I feel like reading a story from a 12-year-old. It lacks character introduction, inconsistent names / characters, rush story telling and weak world-building. Just from what I read so far, there are already a cannon fodder introduced and silenced without explanation whatsoever (ei. The girl who admired the expensive car). The romance? It was so abrupt you feel like "wait...what?". They fell for each other and get married in a few days. Instant trust, with no hint of romance at all. The only detailed description about the characters are on how they looks like (*insert a lot of desctiptive*). The MC has a weak character that suddenly turns aggressive (cat fight) just from a few insult. It's not like she's a transmigrator, reincarnator or an assassin with a mysterious background either, come on author! The only thing that's interesting is the male lead (not having a paralyzed cold face like other romance novel troupe). That's it. More than 3000+ chapters for this kind of story is not worth it. You might get dizzy from the constant plot-jumping, so be warned! I try to give this story a chance and I failed. I might be too harsh given that there are more decent Romance stories here lately, idk. I better off get to other novels here. Adieu.
This story gets worse and worse. Half of the time I was confused and the other half was cringing. The FL acts like she has multiple personality disorder. One moment shes a damsel in distress then shes strangling someone. The ML magically pampers her out of no where. Trust me, it felt so illogical and strange (not endearing at all!). I do not even understand this book's background. No sort of background story was given ever! Read up to 30ish plus chapters and was a survivor
*Sigh, another Mary Sue story?and love at first sight with no reason at all, except that they are the "Protagonists".....ughh...don't we already have the (Trial Marriage Husband:Need To Work Hard) for that type of story....*sigh..so in the end this story is going to be a *Version 2.0*..like, seriously, why can't the story be more like **Quick Transmigration: Face Slapping The Second Female Lead** which has a more reasonable "love at first sight"