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Well ... I'm sorry to say that I'm disappointed, but not with the story but with the criticisms that the hell with which they are chapters of pure text and explanation? I finished the chapters in less than 2 hours and I'm still waiting for the next ones
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La historia esta buena aun van pocos capΓtulos para decir mucho pero bueno, aunque me gustarΓa que se puediras agregar parte de romance pero dado la mentalidad del MC lo veo difΓcil pero espero lo agreguen,espero mas capsππ»ππ»ππ»
Exp exp is a good looking guy who is a good guy and a guy who is a very good guy whowho he is a good guy and he is a good guy and he is a weeeeeeeeeeee man and he is
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more info dump than story.....................................................................................................................................................
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giving 5.0 yeah yeah new chapter yeah. . ...................a... a.. MA.... a. .a... a.. ....... .. ....... . ........... ........... a.. .....
Bueno me encanto y todo se debe a como planteaste al MC. Y leyendo tu historia me dio la idea que un kriptoniano estarΓa demasiado roto en una serie de cultivacion ya que cuando uno cultiva lo que hace es refinar su cuerpo y energΓa para ir en contra del cielo(o mejor dicho las leyes que definen los mundos) y pues podrΓa refinar 2 tipos de energΓas muy diferentes sin ninguna problema ya que automΓ‘ticamente absorbe el sol que si no me falla la suposiciΓ³n es que en todos los wuxias y xianxias en todos lados esta esa energΓa.
The best wish granting fanfic I've ever read, the wishes were well thought out, so far so good except one small inconsistency in the story. Too early for a good review. Like most fics here I don't expect it to go over 40-50 chaps, might not touch there even.
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I love it and don't have any Ideas of dropping it, yet, that may change ;) I am as always too lazy to write a fitting or good Review because I don't have the nerves and time to! just Read it and you'll see of you like it or not
Great work and thanks for your hard work so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story and hope you post soon new chapters can't wait to read your next chapters. Really great story so don't drop it
haven't read but looking at the reviews I'm excited.
amazing it is a very unique book in only 2 chaps feels like I read 10 }:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)}:β)