Esharnival
I have always been writing fanfiction stories before, but this is the first time I write my own character so I don't know what kind of feels the reader can feel from my character's personality, and personally, I'm not really confident about this story since there is so much better story about reborn/reincarnation here besides mine and my English's kind of sucks. But here's I am proudly present to you my novel of being reborn and revenge.
This story is quite good to me...but i would like it if the author could describe the main protagonist in detail. The flow of the story is pretty fast from when the main protagonist was born to when he first enter the academy. The sentence structure is quite confusing such the capital letters and the quotation marks for the dialogue. But the story is good to read.