Leyla Zhan
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The writing was good but the story was very rushed..I was expecting more of a background and also why would the female go back willingly to someone who abused her her, killed her child and committed adultry numerous times..the story was also confusing in sone of the chapters where I had to go back a chapter to see if I missed anything..this story is a โnoโ from me
The overall story is good but there are many major loop holes in the story which l feel. 1. How she escaped from the hospital? What she saw on her phone? did anyone helped her? What happend to surveillance photages? 2. How can she give birth if she doesn't have uterus? Sorry it is not to offended the author but these are the points that l didn't understand ?
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