Maou09
Just one word...LOVED IT...I mean this is such a breath of fresh air in this category of novels. Issie is the protagonist, not some random dude getting super op in 2-3 chapters and trying to catch every girl in the series while trying to be all high and mighty hypocritical fool...well i regressed there so as i was saying mc is issie he comes back from the cultivation world and this is before the story starts so he is not really familiar with all the supernatural stuff. He is still issie not some xianxia fool mc and i loved how author bashes the xianxia troop lol. He is still perverted as he spent most of his time cultivation but it's toned down a bit. A very good read specifically for dxd fans out there. Hope author does continue this novel and drop it in between.
I loved. I just finished reading all the chapters available for now and I have to say that it is very good. You preserve the personalities of the original characters very well. The world background is interesting and sometimes mysterious. The interaction of the characters is very funny and pleasant, it is not forced like other fanfics so the dialogue comes out more natural. And the jokes you put on were a lot of fun. Keep up the fanfic because I really liked it a lot.
was searching for copper and found gold. this is a very good novel. the grammar is Excellent and its very well done. its very funny too and i cant wait to see how you will change canon. will the 3 sides peace treaty still happen? im most curious about how you will deal with Raiser and interact with the girls. From the original i plead you add Koneko, Akeno and Rias to the H. i even wonder... will issei teach cultivation to rias and the other? Koneko should be very compatible with cultivation due to seinjutsu
The only way for this to be better is to fûck rias after riser is defeated. And write for us a very steamy and yummy sêx chapter 9f at least 5.000 words long with aika, rias and issei. With him leaving both of them dead tired and silly faces(âhêgâô). Time for him to AWAKEN. A hârêm king must be boundless in bed.
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