Reviews of RETURN OF THE SHADOW

Its a good start for a first time writer. Story is confusing and not clear so far, but also interesting. Some grammatical errors, but nothing major. Great start. Lets see where it goes..:-)

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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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Not bad but so confusing sometimes... Well, the novel is good but gotta drop it because it confuses me and sometimes, there's a grammatical errors or the sentence are lacking to be understood.