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meixiaolian
meixiaolianLv2meixiaolian

Synopsis is enough to pull the readers in, what I like about a synopsis is short yet intriguing and the author's story did pulled me in. I can sense the author did a lot of research, writing this. I haven't come across a novel before that tackles much about science especially the law of physics. The narration is descriptive enough for readers to grasp the setting, the characters. Give this book a try, everyone! Support the author!

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Obligatory author review! Between researching formatting/editing techniques, devouring countless video essays that discuss pacing/themes/cliches, and hundreds of hours of dabbling in quantum mechanics and archeological study... Crimson Riptide is something I've put a lot of work into. I'm pleased with the balance of realistic character development, and intriguing thought puzzles that support world building. I plan on accomplishing great things within this story, so add it to your collection if you want to occasionally add comments that'll help me along the way!

DelzGB
DelzGBLv13DelzGB

This is a really interesting and unique concept introduced from the get-go, you can definitely find yourself feeling a bit of anxiety at the thought of the flip existing in our world. The writing quality is great, helping to amplify the horror of this phenomenon to us, the readers.

pocchari
pocchariLv1pocchari

Me, a Liberal Arts major, trying to understand science...RIP. But seriously, this is a very creative premise! The writing is good, the characters are interesting, and the story world is clearly meticulously imagined. The only advice I can offer the author is to be mindful of long paragraphs, especially ones with fragmented dialogue. Appropriate paragraph breaks make for a more fluid reading experience. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes!

Bunny_Junnie
Bunny_JunnieLv4Bunny_Junnie

Great plot! Very interesting! You are a very talented author. Your written style is great. I feel like I went inside the book. Keep it up and keep updating. Your readers are eagerly waiting for more!

Sonder_Ella
Sonder_EllaLv2Sonder_Ella

Hi! Your writing style is very intriguing. The story, writing, characters and the whole plot development is so unique yet feels so realistic. Keep on writing and good luck in all your future endeavors!

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉 Dear new readers, Please give this novel a chance. I am sure the author will surprise you in many ways! 🙏

BlindBandit
BlindBanditLv10BlindBandit

For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. In other words, The Daytime (Crimson) moves twice as quickly as the Night-time (Shroud) but it doesn't mean that events that are faster for one observer may not be for another so it belives the counterintuitive idea that time flows differently according to the state of the Crimson and the Shroud, it means to say that despite they are between two speeds they are still connected to each other. For example: If you're traveling from one place to another place let say 10 km away. The absolute distance will be 10 km of course, except the relative distance can be shortened, even if your a shroud, if you're using cars and the crimson is walking. the relative distance shrinks because now the time taken for you to travel over the same distance has been reduced.

Mineva
MinevaLv14Mineva

The premise was interesting enough to catch my attention but the story itself was seriously a banger. I had no idea what I was getting into but so far, so good. I'm looking forward to more!

Riyah404
Riyah404Lv4Riyah404

The plot is unique and interesting., The writing style is great. The author is very detailed. It was a good read. Great job, author! Keep on updating!!! :)

Cher_Yan
Cher_YanLv1Cher_Yan

Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Also, from the synopsis, I was hooked!!! Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️

ihatepower_45
ihatepower_45Lv1ihatepower_45

is that mother flipping Percy Jackson reference If so nice. remember to always stay motivated and keep writing. you have talent do let that go to waste.