4 Rewriting...
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Rem wakes up in a dark place, and she looks around and she groans.
"Where am I…?"
She tries to hold her face, but she can't move them.
She opens her eyes fully and sees that she's in a room, it's dark and she's sitting on an old chair with… with her hands tied at the back of the chair!
Realizing this, made Rem remember what happened before she passed out.
Rem:
"H-hello?? S-someone! Help me!! Is somebody there??! Someone! Anybody! PLease help!!!"
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But no one came, she sighs and tries to calm down, her tongue touches the gap in her teeth that is still new which stings Rem, and tears start to fall out in her face.
She lost a tooth and her nose is probably broken.
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She hears a door creak which she immediately looks at.
The door right there opens and sees the ugly bastard with three other people with him.
Rem starts to hyperventilate as her tears start to pour.
Rem:
"W-who are you?? W-wha-what do you want with me?!"
The people walked in and looked at Rem.
"She's a beauty, isn't she?"
Said the ugly man.
The man besides him nods.
"She is quite beautiful, you got a pretty good one, though, what happened to her face? And is she missing a tooth?.
Rem doesn't know what's going on, but she feels like she's running out of air when she is looking at these anonymous guys who just kidnapped her.
The ugly bastard starts to walk out the room.
"I'm going to search for another beauty like her, you train that girl while I'm out"
The ugly bastard said as he left the room.
The man grins as he cracks his knuckles.
"With pleasure…"
The man looks at Rem and walks to her.
Rem:
"S-stay back! *cough* D-don't come any closer! I-I! Get back!!"
She tries kicking but the man stepped on her foot which she screams out, but the man holds her neck and starts to choke her.
"Listen here you little bitch, If you don't shut up right now, you're going to make this worse for yourself! If you keep on shouting like a cunt, you're going to lose another tooth, you got it?!"
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Rem sniffs as she looks at the man with distress in her eyes, but the man lets her neck go and her foot go as Rem gets to breathe again freely.
She tries to stay calm. She's getting dizzy and she can't afford to pass out in this situation.
Rem is stressed, she could almost break and cry uncontrollably but she holds it in and decides to stay quiet.
She doesnt wanna get hurt.
The man looks at Rem following his order which he grins at her.
"Good, you know how to listen."
Rem looks at him.
Rems Thoughts:
"I can't move my arms… I can't stand and fight more myself… My legs hurt and so does my head… I-I don't want to die…"
The Man:
"What? Do I look that handsome? Or do I look that good? Either way, doesn't matter."
Rem:
"I-i'll get you for this…"
The man looks at Rem.
Rem:
"I-I'll get you for this! I-I-!
Before she can say anything the man kicks her right in the chin which her chair falls and Rem starts to groan and feel the pain, but she tries to endure it as the man fixes the chair with Rem on it and looks at her in the eyes.
The Man:
"If you talk shit like that again. I promise you, it won't end well."
The man slaps her face and slaps her again before she massages his hand.
"H-hey. Don't you think hurting her is too much?"
Asks the other man.
"Cunts like her dont listen, not unless you show them how to. I wouldn't call it going too far, it's called disciplining them."
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Rem spits out blood to the side as she looks at them, very quietly.
The Man:
"See? She's quiet now. Nothing to worry about now"
Other Man:
"I just hope you know what you're doing"
The Man:
"Oh don't sweat it, it's just a normal bitch, what is she going to do?? Break free and kill us??"
The man laughs as he looks at Rem and pokes her cheeks.
"You're weak! You can't do shit! You're worthless! You hear that! Worthless! No one will miss you when we're done!"
The man fixes his clothing as he goes for the door.
"I'm gonna go get something to drink, watch her while I'm gone."
The two other men nod and look at Rem, and Rem is strangely quiet.
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Other Man:
"Do you think she's some kind of demon about to attack us at any second?"
Other Other Man:
"No, as the boss said, she's just a bitch. A bitch who can't do shit."
Other Man:
"I'm hoping you're right…"
They look at Rem….
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Looking at her is already intense enough for the atmosphere.
