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A good idea, but bad execution. The author said he uses "Grammarly" but it is still almost unreadable, or just a headache to read. Maybe he improved over time, but I just canΒ΄t bring myself to sit down and read more than 10 chapters. Author, if you read this, I recommend you rewrite the first few chapters to iron out all the mistakes, or just ask a friend/editor to proofread it for you,
hero is op... this is most basic thing I want.and good friends/teammates +harem too and dungeons and monsters and what not. I haven't seen whole book. only up to 65+ chap. but I didn't see any reason to not continue this novel. anyone reading this review to whether or not read this book. I recommend to try atleast 30+ chapters
its an honest reveiw here so the writting quality is all over the place in the very very beggining but cleared up some by the second chapter if not the second half of the first chapter maybe make it a bit more organized and itd be good now the story progressions is to fast paced your here then there this happened then that it has great potential but at the same time needs to be worked on and touched up here and there and its good to go oh and slow it down some as well and that's about it 4.0 pretty good