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REINCARTED ANOTHER WORLD CARD USER

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Mushroom_king
Mushroom_kingLv3Mushroom_king

you have a good idea a nice concept but the gramar is just so bad it hurts to read.

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DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

bit.ly/3LyRF1N πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

mojag0018
mojag0018Lv15mojag0018

to be honest the concept is there. the story should be there too, but your writing quality is terrible. worse than mtl in my opinion which should say something. get an editor. and stop rushing the story

Bierbart
BierbartLv14Bierbart

Reveal spoiler

JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv1JJ_Prakoso

Reveal spoiler

Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv4Man_of_culture

A good idea, but bad execution. The author said he uses "Grammarly" but it is still almost unreadable, or just a headache to read. Maybe he improved over time, but I just canΒ΄t bring myself to sit down and read more than 10 chapters. Author, if you read this, I recommend you rewrite the first few chapters to iron out all the mistakes, or just ask a friend/editor to proofread it for you,

DarkPrince
DarkPrinceLv13DarkPrince

you know, even after this much bad reviews I still see hope In this story, I will support you, keep up the good work, as you can only learn more by trying harder...

Marethyue
MarethyueLv3Marethyue

ok, for real, the writing quality sucks. i can't understand anything and im used to reading machine translated stuff. not recommended, but if the chapters were revised from the beginning it could be a pretty decent novel

Rahul_Charan_9446
Rahul_Charan_9446Lv4Rahul_Charan_9446

hero is op... this is most basic thing I want.and good friends/teammates +harem too and dungeons and monsters and what not. I haven't seen whole book. only up to 65+ chap. but I didn't see any reason to not continue this novel. anyone reading this review to whether or not read this book. I recommend to try atleast 30+ chapters

Sadast
SadastLv15Sadast

the grammar kills this. the concept may be good. to be honest I'm not sure what the heck was really happening due to how bad the grammar was

Shadow_king_393
Shadow_king_393Lv4Shadow_king_393

I feel this is your first so an advice use 3rd person point of view 2. keep changing point view from him to another person but so far you did avery good job πŸ‘πŸ‘

Kw0z
Kw0zLv13Kw0z

Bro… Not even grammarly knew how to fix your grammar. That’s when you know that you’re beyond saving. I doubt even the best editor would want to edit this.

revolverheld
revolverheldLv5revolverheld

Reading this was worse than reading mtl story is decent is you can get that, I couldn't though I read it as a free day promotion so i wasn't out anything at least

blazing_dragon
blazing_dragonLv14blazing_dragon

I like the story but where are the new chapters?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

XArezzX
XArezzXLv13XArezzX

The grammar is all messy, and it goes premium with bad grammar at 31 chapters, it's not really worth wasting unlocking those chapters, sorry dude, you had a great concept at the beginning

Single_Boi
Single_BoiLv1Single_Boi

your story is exactly how i want but the only thing holding it back is the quality of the story exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

Archeleaus
ArcheleausLv3Archeleaus

is the title supposed to say reincarted ? isn’t it supposed to say reincarnated? plz tell me!

Sam_Kumar_3748
Sam_Kumar_3748Lv1Sam_Kumar_3748

Except for the writing quality everything is good.. loved the story...it's full of surprises...so you will not be bored, I loved the cooking part. Thanks for the book

Lucien121
Lucien121Lv15Lucien121

its an honest reveiw here so the writting quality is all over the place in the very very beggining but cleared up some by the second chapter if not the second half of the first chapter maybe make it a bit more organized and itd be good now the story progressions is to fast paced your here then there this happened then that it has great potential but at the same time needs to be worked on and touched up here and there and its good to go oh and slow it down some as well and that's about it 4.0 pretty good

Lancee
LanceeLv1Lancee

The book has potential. Good use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole. And as a reader you get the chance to see the author's ideas and how he placed them to make them into a story