Unholy_Student
A story looses focus it it has too much on its plate. Basically this shouldn't be call MHA, it doesn't focus on MHA, and jump around to other story. Example, a movie about Will Smith, the actor, with his face, name, and trailer across the ads. Just to get a 5 second clip at the end of the movie. I.e. I want my time spent reading this back.
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This fanfic seems written by someone with attention problems, I don't understand, it's called "gamer in MHA" but I don't see anything about MHA, except helping Midoriya for ... I don't know what you want from an annoying boy with a hero fetish, I know called "butcher" in his previous life right? It looks like a robot without thoughts and I don't see anything similar to the first chapter where the author shows us how he dies after killing his murderer and lack of fear of death, transmigrating took away the thought process ??? Now he plays with children and acts as a basic AI, a waste of time unfortunately, I expected something more besides random worlds and random fights without any context other than doing word count, also 900 words per cap is too short, webnovel does not recommend novels of this style ...