Sup... You may want to check your grammar. The Synopsis is badly written lol. And that scares away readers. Since if the summary is that bad, the chapters could be worse.
I recommend using grammatically. Its free
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Yes! Yes! Jean as the ship I like it I am interested, Continue writing but change your writing style once in a while it could actually scare people off and try to make your own original things.
Very GOOD AMAZING I LOVE THIS THIS IS AMAZING JUST NEEDS MOAR UPDATES, this is very good it is awesome i can't wait for next chapter.
Also by the way its very detailed and the wholesomeness in these chapters are next level.