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My Dragon System

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neoma
neomaLv13neoma

Started reading this out of curiosity about the MVS prequel. Interesting story! I enjoyed reading it, but I felt the ending was a bit rushed...

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RedTorero
RedToreroLv10RedTorero

Story not bad, but for god's sake, characters in many situations are too stupid. Even smart ones do something like "we can tell everyone that we go to a suspicious place, but why should we? They will panic when they can't find us. And we can easily reply to the messages, but noooo, we don't want to, it's too easy. If we reply, no one will die and get hurt." Grammar sometimes so bad, that I start to forget how to write and my eyes won't stop bleeding.

Kameron_Sandifer
Kameron_SandiferLv1Kameron_Sandifer

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Andrew_Williams_5753
Andrew_Williams_5753Lv2Andrew_Williams_5753

I loved this novel since the beginning. I indulge myself in this mysterious tale everyday, and I'm always awaiting fo the next update. I hope it goes on for a long time.

TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv13TheLonelyGod

This Novel is a MUST read, I am sure people will enjoy this one as it is entertaining and realy really really R-E-A-L-L-Y good...you'll love it I assure you!!!😁😁

Lyriker
LyrikerLv14Lyriker

It's a great story with an interesting concept that at least I have not seen before but this means nothing I'm no expert just to make thing's clear

JustPassing123
JustPassing123Lv14JustPassing123

I'm deeply disappointed in this novel. I was hoping for more from the "best author" at webnovel. writing quality so-so, a lot of errors, characters are childish and so on. It's as if it was written by a middle schooler. If you are planning of reading this, don't. Just watch Naruto instead. MDS is pretty much a cheap copy of it. Ray is Naruto, Gary is Sasuke, Shadow is Akatsuki, kyle is Neji?, krad is madara, etc

La_Boule
La_BouleLv2La_Boule

The main character is a complete cretin and a moron, I have not seen anyone more stupid in the original works, the dragon who lived for 1000 years could not learn at least some wisdom, and the ugliness of the world is some kind of garbage, where every f***ing person wants to ruin everything, I do not understand how human society has not yet rotted under the attacks of the plague

Tsukimori
TsukimoriLv14Tsukimori

After reading the entirety of the book as of June 26 2020. I thought it was great the grammer is alright but it makes for some funny moments and let's your imagination run a little wild. Although some may not like the fact that this book may have took a story chunk and inserted it here I like it. For one thing every one learns by building off of another even if some are very obvious and others are very subtle, but this is a story that has had me hooked and made me spend way too much but it's worth it. I hope you will continue to make the story because I am willing to read it all the way through. I may not donate but it's because I want to read the whole thing without throwing my wallet into the campfire. May God bless you and may you be prosperous.

P1zaBox
P1zaBoxLv3P1zaBox

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kold6tolv
kold6tolvLv4kold6tolv

The story is kind of good, but the quality of the writing has made me not want to continue reading. There are several grammatical mistakes each chapter, and the author often does things in sentences such as "He also had black scales as well". The background of the story is also somewhat annoying, especially considering the main character is supposed to be the incarnation of the strongest dragon, but he knows nothing about the world. Not how to practise ki, not that monstors have cores nada nothing. The story itself also has a habit of jumping around in the action, where often you go from one thing to another very quickly, and it's up to the reader to figure out what is going on. So the story itself has potential, but the grammatical errors, the weak backstory and the jumping in action leaves me wanting to stop reading.

HighlanderCharles
HighlanderCharlesLv15HighlanderCharles

Really didn’t want to see it end, but how you finished was just Awesome. Camt wait to see wHat you do with MVS and MWS. Keep up with the writing 😎

Dennis_W
Dennis_WLv13Dennis_W

can't wait to read more by this author, I'm not enjoyed a great book in a long time. has been great reading a book I can get into. looking forward to him completing his other books

Tim_Phillips
Tim_PhillipsLv15Tim_Phillips

a very beautifully made story. the mc is slow to develop but every chapter is a cliffhanger. it is a great prequel to the up coming trilogy in the series.

Loli83
Loli83Lv2Loli83

i really enjoyed reading this. i like it. keep up the good work author. 👍👏👍❤😉👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

donschmiddy
donschmiddyLv13donschmiddy

not the worst, not the best either... not 1, not 2, not 3 but 4 timeskips in the first 50 chapters. characters are a disjointed mess, and the worldbuilding is a mess at best.... come on no one would train their 2 year old child with edged weapons. Hell i recieved my first dagger at 8. I mean the mc can't even hold a spoon by his own admission and you are giving him a shortsword? you know that a normal dagger for a grown man made out of steel weighs upto a killogram, right? Forget fighting, an 8 year old couldn't lift a shortsword let alone fight with it. I know it is a fantasy world but come on...

Brock_Nowlin
Brock_NowlinLv10Brock_Nowlin

In my opinion this noveL is unappreciated. the reason i say that is because it does not get the attention it deserves. This was my first real webnovel of sorts so of course i am biased but nonetheless I hope it gets more attention in the future

Evan_Tominsky
Evan_TominskyLv3Evan_Tominsky

it's a great read that I've been binging for the last week. it has great characters that all work and interact with everything. the main character is OP but not too OP too fast.

YourBoiNex
YourBoiNexLv14YourBoiNex

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Brother59
Brother59Lv15Brother59

Its rough to say the least. The mc is pretty dumb and severely overhyped thanks to him being the last dragon who saw everyone of his kind die. So what happens? He makes constant mistakes like he is an actual kid and the power scaling is extremely inconsistent with random spikes and low points that make no sense. The pacing is even slower at some points and I didn’t mind, but I can understand if someone doesn’t like that. It just doesn’t work and constantly goes back and forth between I’m a wise powerful dragon and a kids first RPG. Plus I checked later chapters for spelling since it didn’t flow right and even in the 400’s he gets words wrong. Overall it’s rough and just not for anyone with a bad suspension of disbelief.